List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议用更自然的表达方式，简洁明了地说明不做购物清单的原因。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to decide what to buy based on how I feel at the moment. Making a list feels stressful to me.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，缺乏逻辑和具体内容。建议直接回答问题，并用清晰的句子说明不做工作清单的原因。

例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I prefer to handle tasks spontaneously. I find that planning too much can be limiting.

提案: 回答表达混乱，逻辑不清。建议用简洁的句子说明为什么有些人不喜欢做清单，并给出具体原因。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be flexible and enjoy unexpected experiences rather than following a strict plan.

提案: 回答重复且不够连贯。建议直接回答问题，并简洁说明不喜欢做清单的原因。

例: I don't usually make lists, whether on paper or on my phone. I prefer to decide my plans spontaneously based on what makes me happy each day.

× I'm people who like to make decisions based on my feelings and emotions.

✓ I'm a person who likes to make decisions based on my feelings and emotions.

这里“people”是复数形式，但主语“I”是单数，应该用单数形式“a person”，动词“like”也要改为第三人称单数形式“likes”。

× I feel that making a list is really like stress for me.

✓ I feel that making a list is really stressful for me.

“stress”是名词，句中需要形容词来描述感受，正确用法是“stressful”。

× I dislike.

✓ I dislike it.

“dislike”是及物动词，后面需要宾语，这里缺少宾语“it”。

× I dislike making making lists and and my MBTI is in FP.

✓ I dislike making lists and my MBTI is FP.

句中“making making”和“and and”重复，应删除多余部分。

× People tend to make everything we can't believe, we can't predict, so never.

✓ People tend to avoid making plans because we can't believe or predict everything, so never.

原句表达不清，代词使用混乱，需调整句子结构使意思明确。

× I understand that that that people, that person must be me, right?

✓ I understand that the person you are talking about must be me, right?

重复使用“that”导致句子不通顺，需调整代词和句子结构。

× I feel that being adopted to everything and be it's more important compared to making everything go smoothly as we predict and the more interesting will appear, the interesting life will have.

✓ I feel that adapting to everything is more important compared to making everything go smoothly as we predict, and more interesting things will appear, making life more interesting.

“being adopted to”用法错误，应为“adapting to”；句子结构混乱，需调整语序和表达。

× So no matter it's on the phone, it's online or on or face to face making or office to paper, I dislike, I hate.

✓ So no matter if it's on the phone, online, face to face, or on paper, I dislike it, I hate it.

原句代词使用不当，缺少连接词，句子不完整，需补充连接词和宾语。