List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达，同时使句子更简洁流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me plan what to buy and estimate the cost more accurately.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达略显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意词汇搭配，如'schedule'应用作名词或动词时需调整句子结构。

例: Yes, I make lists to organize my tasks, which helps me manage my time effectively and meet deadlines.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达原因，并且句子结构应更连贯。

例: I'm not sure, but maybe some people prefer flexible schedules and feel that making lists is too strict or limiting for their work.

提案: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议使用更简洁的句子，注意介词和形容词的正确使用。

例: It depends; if I have to visit many places, I prefer making a list on my phone for convenience, but paper lists help me plan more detailed tasks.

× So when I making a list before I go to the shop I can plan it for a better way.

✓ So when I make a list before I go to the shop, I can plan it in a better way.

这里动词'making'用法错误，应该用动词原形'make'，因为前面有助动词'when I'，需要用动词原形。

× Making a list can help me to plan what to buy and how much they were.

✓ Making a list can help me to plan what to buy and how much they cost.

这里'how much they were'用法不当，应该用'how much they cost'表示价格。

× but making a list on paper can help me to make the plan more detail.

✓ but making a list on paper can help me to make the plan more detailed.

'more detail'应改为形容词形式'more detailed'，因为修饰名词'plan'需要用形容词。