List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“rare time to to be spent”应为“rare time to spend”，且“Make a List”不应大写。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复词汇，并使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time. Since I have limited time to spend in supermarkets due to taking care of my kids, a list allows me to find what I need quickly and efficiently.

提案: 回答结构较好，但表达略显笨拙，如“divide the priorities and things that are less important”不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I regularly make lists for my weekly schedule because I handle various tasks besides teaching. I like to prioritize important tasks and set aside less urgent ones to manage my time effectively.

提案: 回答内容具体且连贯，表达清晰。建议在表达时可以使用更多连接词如“therefore”或“however”来增强逻辑性，使回答更自然。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they manage their tasks differently. For example, if they are unclear about the purpose or steps, they may hesitate to write a list. Moreover, some prefer flexibility rather than sticking to a strict plan.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“prefer to listing in my phones”应为“prefer listing on my phone”，且句子结构混乱。建议加强语法练习，注意句子完整性和逻辑性。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone. In particular, I like using an app called E Notebook, which allows me not only to write down tasks but also to record audio and add pictures or important documents.

× I have rare time to to be spent in the supermarkets.

✓ I have rare time to spend in the supermarkets.

这里的 'rare time' 应该是 'rare time'，但更自然的表达是 'little time'，表示时间很少。'to to be spent' 是错误的重复，应该改为 'to spend'。

× So Make a List will help me to save time and find what I want quickly.

✓ So making a list will help me save time and find what I want quickly.

'Make a List' 作为动作，应该用动名词形式 'making a list'。另外，'help me to save' 中的 'to' 可以省略，'help me save' 更自然。

× I make lists regularly for weekly schedules because I am in charge of different affairs except teaching responsibilities.

✓ I make lists regularly for weekly schedules because I am in charge of different affairs except teaching responsibility.

'teaching responsibilities' 应该用单数 'teaching responsibility'，因为这里指的是教学职责作为一个整体。

× I prefer to divide the priorities and things that are less important.

✓ I prefer to divide priorities and things that are less important.

'the priorities' 中的定冠词 'the' 不必要，直接用复数名词 'priorities' 更合适。

× I prefer to listing in my phones.

✓ I prefer listing on my phone.

'prefer to listing' 是错误的搭配，应该是 'prefer listing' 或 'prefer to list'。另外，'in my phones' 应该是 'on my phone'，表示在手机上。

× Particularly I love one application of E notebook in my in which I cannot only write down what I want to do.

✓ Particularly, I love an application called E notebook on my phone in which I can not only write down what I want to do.

'application of E notebook' 应该是 'an application called E notebook'。'in my' 后面缺少名词，应该是 'on my phone'。

× Also I can record and add pictures or other necessary documents.

✓ Also, I can record and add pictures or other necessary documents.

句首的 'Also' 后面需要逗号，表示连接词。