List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to keep your answers concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me organize what I need for the upcoming week. Moreover, it guides me through the aisles efficiently and helps me estimate my expenses.

提案: Your answer is well-structured and informative, but try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors like 'aim on finishing' which should be 'aim to finish'.

例: Yes, I make lists for my assignments, prioritizing them from most to least important. This method helps me manage my time effectively, making my daily routine more efficient.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat vague and repetitive. Try to be more specific and concise, and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it repetitive and unnecessary. Additionally, they may feel burdened by the pressure to stay organized or dislike carrying a list around.

提案: Your answer is personal and clear but a bit wordy and repetitive. Try to express your preference more succinctly and use linking words to improve flow.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I can see them directly in front of me. Also, it helps me avoid distractions from my phone and organize my tasks more easily.

× I think that some people may not like making this as they feel like it's very repetitive and they just don't see the urgency in having an organized way of seeing things, and they may not like carrying around this and they may feel pressured to do so.

✓ I think that some people may not like making lists as they feel like it's very repetitive and they just don't see the urgency in having an organized way of seeing things, and they may not like carrying lists around and they may feel pressured to do so.

The word 'this' is incorrectly used as a pronoun referring to 'making lists'. The correct noun to refer to is 'lists'. Using 'this' here is incorrect because 'this' refers to a singular object or concept, but 'making lists' is plural in context. Replacing 'this' with 'lists' corrects the pronoun usage and clarifies the meaning.

× Having it on paper helps me beforehand organize the things I need and it's way more easier for me to see it in front of my face.

✓ Having it on paper helps me organize the things I need beforehand and it's way easier for me to see it in front of my face.

The phrase 'way more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective and should not be preceded by 'more'. The correct form is 'way easier'. Also, the adverb 'beforehand' should be placed after the verb 'organize' for natural word order. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and sentence flow.