List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "like at vegetable or", bạn nên nói rõ hơn về các mặt hàng bạn mua. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I go to buy groceries for my family because it helps me remember all the items I need, such as vegetables, fruits, and dairy products.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh bỏ dở câu.

例: Yes, I often make lists when I bake cakes because it helps me organize the ingredients quickly. Also, when I go to the local store, I can easily check the list on my phone.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc. Hãy dùng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "it have to". Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích rõ lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming to write everything down quickly, and they prefer to remember things without notes.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "who write down slowly" và câu kết "and both" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại hơn giấy.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because I type faster than I write, so it saves me time and is more convenient.

× I often make lists when I go to buy something for my family because it helps me to remember all the things that I want to buy like at vegetable or.

✓ I often make lists when I go to buy something for my family because it helps me to remember all the things that I want to buy, like vegetables.

The word 'vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables' because it refers to multiple items. Using singular form here is incorrect when talking about general items in plural.

× I often make lists for making cakes because it helps me put everything quickly and when I go to local store I can open the.

✓ I often make lists for making cakes because it helps me organize everything quickly, and when I go to the local store, I can open the list.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Put everything quickly' is vague; 'organize everything quickly' is clearer. Also, 'local store' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion for clarity.

× I think some people don't like making this because it have to take note and write down quickly to remember something that they want to buy and it can be waste time of people.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they have to take notes and write quickly to remember something they want to buy, and it can waste people's time.

'Making this' should be 'making lists' to match context. 'Have' should be 'have' to agree with plural subject 'people'. 'Take note' should be plural 'take notes'. 'Waste time of people' is incorrect; correct form is 'waste people's time'.

× I prefer making these on my phone to paper because I'm a person who write down slowly.

✓ I prefer making these on my phone rather than on paper because I'm a person who writes slowly.

The phrase 'prefer making these on my phone to paper' is better expressed as 'prefer making these on my phone rather than on paper'. Also, 'write down slowly' should be 'writes slowly' to match subject and verb form.

× When I take note on my phone, I can save my time and both.

✓ When I take notes on my phone, I can save my time and effort.

'Take note' should be plural 'take notes'. The phrase 'save my time and both' is unclear; 'save my time and effort' is more appropriate and grammatically correct.