List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和口语填充词，使用更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and where to find the items, which saves money and avoids waste.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的表达，建议使用完整句子，避免重复和口语化的填充词，增强表达的清晰度。

例: Yes, I always use my smartphone's reminder app to set a to-do list for my work, and it is very effective for keeping me organized.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议使用更准确的句子结构，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Some people may dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom, and if the list is not managed well, it can become a burden.

提案: 句子结构不完整，语法错误较多，建议注意主谓一致，使用完整句子，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because smartphones have many reminder applications that help me organize my tasks efficiently.

× I prefer use my phone to make a list 'cause with the development of technology the smartphone have a lot of reminders application and I can use this application to set the To Do List.

✓ I prefer to use my phone to make a list 'cause with the development of technology smartphones have a lot of reminder applications and I can use these applications to set the To Do List.

这里'smartphone'和'application'需要用复数形式，因为指的是多种智能手机和多种提醒应用。'have'对应复数主语'smartphones'。此外，'reminders application'应改为'reminder applications'，形容词用单数形式修饰复数名词。建议注意名词的单复数形式和主谓一致。

× Yes, when I go shopping I always make a list 'cause make A to do list can help me recognize that uh, what to buy and uh, where to buy so that it can save money and don't waste a lot of money.

✓ Yes, when I go shopping I always make a list 'cause making a to-do list can help me recognize what to buy and where to buy so that it can save money and not waste a lot of money.

动词'make'在这里作为动名词使用，表示动作的概念，应使用动名词形式'making'。此外，'don't waste'应改为'not waste'，因为前面是'can'的否定形式。建议注意动词形式的正确使用。

× I prefer use my phone to make a list 'cause with the development of technology the smartphone have a lot of reminders application and I can use this application to set the To Do List.

✓ I prefer to use my phone to make a list 'cause with the development of technology smartphones have a lot of reminder applications and I can use these applications to set the To Do List.

'smartphone'应为复数'smartphones'，'application'应为复数'applications'，且前面应使用复数指示代词'these'。主谓一致需要注意。

× I prefer use my phone to make a list 'cause with the development of technology the smartphone have a lot of reminders application and I can use this application to set the To Do List.

✓ I prefer to use my phone to make a list because with the development of technology, smartphones have a lot of reminder applications and I can use these applications to set the To Do List.

'cause'是口语缩写，正式书面语中应使用'because'。此外，'with the development of technology'后应加逗号以分隔句子成分。建议注意介词短语的正确使用和标点符号。

× I prefer use my phone to make a list 'cause with the development of technology the smartphone have a lot of reminders application and I can use this application to set the To Do List.

✓ I prefer to use my phone to make a list because with the development of technology, the smartphone has a lot of reminder applications and I can use these applications to set the To Do List.

如果'smartphone'为单数，谓语动词应为'has'而非'have'，主谓一致错误。建议根据主语单复数选择正确的动词形式。