List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，比如“making a list”应为“make a list”，“will not lost”应为“will not lose”。建议注意动词时态和形式的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余表达。可以尝试简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping with my parents. It helps me manage my budget and ensures I don't forget important items. For example, last week I almost forgot to buy milk, but thanks to my list, I remembered it.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“making”应为“make”，表达不够流畅。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。同时，提供更具体的细节来支持观点。

例: Yes, I make a work list when I have important tasks. It helps me prioritize my duties and ensures I complete significant tasks on time.

提案: 回答较为完整，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，导致表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词如“because”、“so”来使句子更连贯，同时可以用更具体的例子来丰富内容。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to follow their own routines and work at their own pace. Therefore, they may feel that lists are not helpful for them.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“the last Sunday I have”应为“last Sunday I had”，以及“gotta”不适合正式场合。建议注意时态一致，避免口语化词汇，表达更自然流畅。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone. For example, last Sunday I lost my paper list before an important meeting with my colleagues, which caused me to forget some tasks.

× Yes, I usually making a list when I go shopping with my parents.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping with my parents.

动词后面通常用原形或适当形式，'usually'后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词'making'。

× I will not lost anything important.

✓ I will not lose anything important.

'will'后面应接动词原形，不能用过去式'lost'。

× Like for example last week I I want to buy a milk but if I had don't have a list I will want I will lost this.

✓ For example, last week I wanted to buy milk but if I didn't have a list, I would lose it.

表达过去时应使用过去式'wanted'，否定句中应使用'didn't have'，虚拟语气中用'would lose'，不能用混合时态和错误形式。

× I forget this to buy the milk.

✓ I forgot to buy the milk.

描述过去发生的动作应使用过去式'forgot'，而不是现在式'forget'。

× Yes, I particularly making a working list when I do some important task and I think it's really helpful for me to manage my priorities and something significant.

✓ Yes, I particularly make a working list when I do some important tasks and I think it's really helpful for me to manage my priorities and other significant things.

'particularly'后应接动词原形'make'，'task'应为复数形式'tasks'，'something significant'表达不完整，改为'other significant things'更合适。

× Because some people like to follow their own routines or their personal habits instead of relying on the list, and some people have their own pace to do so, they may not feel the list can help them.

✓ Because some people like to follow their own routines or personal habits instead of relying on a list, and some people have their own pace to do so; they may not feel that the list can help them.

'the list'改为'a list'更符合泛指，句子中应使用分号或句号分隔两个独立分句，'feel the list can help them'应加连接词'that'。

× I lost my paper list on the last Sunday and the last Sunday I have an important meeting with my colleagues.

✓ I lost my paper list last Sunday and had an important meeting with my colleagues that day.

'last Sunday'前不加定冠词'the'，第二句应使用过去时'had'，保持时态一致。

× So this is a main big mistake for me to write a list on paper and I gotta forget it.

✓ So it was a big mistake for me to write a list on paper and I forgot it.

'main big'搭配不当，改为'big mistake'，'gotta'为口语缩写，正式表达应为'forgot'，保持时态一致。