List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和重复，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I go with my parents because it helps me manage my budget and find the items I need more easily.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用清晰的句子结构，避免重复，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me manage important tasks and ensure I don't forget anything. For example, when urgent issues arise, my list helps me address them more effectively.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议简化表达，明确观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Honestly, I think many people consider making lists a waste of time because they are too busy. Also, some prefer to rely on their memory rather than following a list.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和重复，且句子不够简洁。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达，并注意时态和单复数。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I once lost my paper list and couldn't find it, which caused me to forget important tasks for the day.

× Yes, for most of time I will make a list when I go shopping with my parents for the reason that making a shop.

✓ Yes, for most of the time I will make a list when I go shopping with my parents because I am making a shop.

“most of time”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“most of the time”。另外，“for the reason that making a shop”结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，建议改为“because I am making a shop”。

× Making a list can help me to manage my budget and find my find my things that I want to buy more easily.

✓ Making a list can help me manage my budget and find the things that I want to buy more easily.

“find my find my things”重复且不自然，应删除重复部分。并且“my things”改为“the things”更符合表达习惯。

× Yes, I make a list for my work and I I suppose that it is helpful for me to manage the important things and I will won't forget any things I want to do at the this moment.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and I suppose that it is helpful for me to manage important things and I won't forget anything I want to do at this moment.

“I I”重复，应删除一个。“will won't”是矛盾表达，应改为“won't”。“any things”应为“anything”。“at the this moment”中“the”多余，应删除。

× And for for example, for some emergence emergent things I can make a list can help me to solve it better.

✓ For example, for some emergent things, making a list can help me solve them better.

“for for”重复，应删除一个。“emergence emergent”用词错误，应使用“emergent”。“I can make a list can help me”结构重复，应简化为“making a list can help me”。“solve it”中的“it”应改为复数“them”，与“things”一致。

× Honestly, I think that's the most people think making this is the waste of time and they don't have the too much time to make a specific list for them to manage them their things and some.

✓ Honestly, I think most people think making lists is a waste of time and they don't have too much time to make a specific list to manage their things.

“that's the most people”中“the”多余，应删除。“making this is the waste of time”结构错误，应改为“making lists is a waste of time”。“the too much time”中“the”多余，应删除。“for them to manage them their things and some”表达混乱，应简化为“to manage their things”。

× However, there are some people just like to follow their roots.

✓ However, some people just like to follow their routines.

“roots”用词错误，应为“routines”，意为“习惯”。

× I prefer to make a list on my phones rather than on the paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper.

“phones”应为单数“phone”，因为通常指手机。“the paper”中“the”多余，应删除。

× For example, I make a list on the paper, but in the afternoon I lost these papers and I I I cannot find it anywhere.

✓ For example, I make a list on paper, but in the afternoon I lost those papers and I cannot find them anywhere.

“these papers”应改为“those papers”，因为指过去的东西。“it”应改为“them”，与“papers”复数一致。

× So I lost this important things I want to do in today.

✓ So I lost these important things I want to do today.

“this important things”中“this”应改为复数“these”，与“things”一致。“in today”应改为“today”。