List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list when I have many items to buy because it helps me shop in an organized way and ensures I don't forget anything important.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用完整句子并避免重复，同时增加具体细节说明清单如何帮助工作。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day because it helps me keep track of my tasks and prioritize them effectively.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确表达观点，使用连词连接理由，并避免模糊词汇。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome, while others may think it's useful but still choose not to make one.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用完整句子，明确表达偏好，并具体说明手机列表的优点。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can carry it everywhere, and it can remind me with alarms and notifications.

× I think sometimes when I have a lot of things want to buy, I will list it.

✓ I think sometimes when I have a lot of things I want to buy, I will list them.

这里缺少了关系代词"I"，并且"it"指代不明确，应该用复数代词"them"来指代"a lot of things"。

× I think it makes me buy things in order and allow allows me don't forget to buy something important.

✓ I think it helps me buy things in order and allows me not to forget to buy something important.

"allow allows me don't forget"结构错误，应该用"allows me not to forget"，动词后面接不定式而不是省略"to"的否定形式。

× Yes, of course I make a list for my work, umm, actually every day.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list for my work, umm, actually every day.

此句无明显量词错误，保持原句。

× I think it is very important. It can shows me what things I need to do and how is it that I can I can do it in the.

✓ I think it is very important. It can show me what things I need to do and how I can do them.

"shows"应为"show"与主语"it"一致，"how is it that I can I can do it in the"结构混乱，应简化为"how I can do them"。

× One of the reasons may be they think it is bothering.

✓ One of the reasons may be they think it is bothersome.

"bothering"用作形容词不合适，应该用形容词"bothersome"表示令人烦恼的。

× The second reason I think maybe they think it is useful, though they may don't make it.

✓ The second reason I think is maybe they think it is useless, so they may not make it.

原句中"may don't"错误，应该用"may not"，且语义上应为"useless"（无用的）而非"useful"。

× I think make it on my phone is the best choice or maybe I can carry my to everywhere so it can remind me.

✓ I think making a list on my phone is the best choice because I can carry it everywhere so it can remind me.

缺少动名词"making"作主语，"my"后缺少名词，应该是"it"指代列表。

× Another reason is that I think it has some other functions such as alarming me to do something this is.

✓ Another reason is that I think it has some other functions such as reminding me to do something.

"alarming me to do something this is"结构不完整且用词不当，应该用"reminding me to do something"。