List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。特に「Make risks」は意味が通じません。より自然な表現を使い、具体的な例を明確に述べることが重要です。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, without a list, I often end up purchasing food that goes to waste.

提案: 文が不明瞭で繰り返しが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。明確な主語と動詞を使い、計画の効果を具体的に説明しましょう。

例: Yes, I always make a study plan because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively.

提案: 「making risks」は誤りで、「making lists」と言いたいはずです。文法と語彙の誤りを直し、理由をもっと具体的に述べると良いです。

例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time, and they may find planning difficult or tiring.

提案: 繰り返しや誤った単語（"wrist"）があり、意味が不明瞭です。正しい語彙を使い、理由を簡潔に述べましょう。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can check my list anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I always. Make risks because it helps me to avoid purchasing unnecessary things.

✓ Yes, I always make lists because it helps me to avoid purchasing unnecessary things.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a verb in the first part. 'Make risks' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'make lists'. The sentence should be combined properly to form a complete thought.

× For example, without a waste, I often buy unnecessary food.

✓ For example, without waste, I often buy unnecessary food.

The phrase 'without a waste' is incorrect because 'waste' is an uncountable noun here and does not require the article 'a'. Removing 'a' makes the phrase grammatically correct.

× Yes I do when I study I always make plan to study and it is it work for me because it helps me to planning to plan the rate of work working.

✓ Yes, I do. When I study, I always make a plan, and it works for me because it helps me to plan the rate of work.

The original sentence is run-on and contains redundant and incorrect phrases such as 'it is it work' and 'planning to plan the rate of work working'. It needs punctuation and correction of verb forms to be clear and grammatically correct.

× Some people do not like making risks because it it takes a lot of time.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because it takes a lot of time.

The phrase 'making risks' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'making lists'. Also, 'it it' is a repetition error. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× Also, those who are not good at planning may find it tired and difficult to my schedule.

✓ Also, those who are not good at planning may find it tiring and difficult to manage my schedule.

'Find it tired' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'find it tiring'. Also, 'difficult to my schedule' is incomplete; it should be 'difficult to manage my schedule' or similar.

× I prefer I prefer to make the list on my phone because I have it anytime so I can check the wrist anywhere and anytime for exam in that paper.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because I have it anytime, so I can check the list anywhere and anytime, unlike on paper.

The sentence has repetition ('I prefer I prefer'), incorrect word usage ('check the wrist' instead of 'check the list'), and awkward phrasing. Correcting these makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.