List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because, as a student with limited money, I need to prioritize essential items and avoid buying extras.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your ideas clearly.

例: I don't make lists for work since I'm a student, but I do create daily to-do lists. They help me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion more clearly and provide specific reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it inconvenient and feel pressured to complete all tasks, which can be stressful.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to complete your sentences and explain your preference clearly with reasons and linking words.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and less likely to be lost compared to paper lists.

× Of course, at least for me is necessary for for shopping because as a student I just have limited money, so I have to calculate what things I really need and what is the extra.

✓ Of course, at least for me it is necessary for shopping because as a student I just have limited money, so I have to calculate what things I really need and what is extra.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'is necessary', which is required for grammatical correctness. Also, 'the extra' should be 'extra' as it refers to additional items in general, not a specific noun.

× No, I'm not a worker, but as a student I really like make a list every every day and A to do list.

✓ No, I'm not a worker, but as a student I really like making a list every day and a to-do list.

After the verb 'like', the gerund form (verb + -ing) should be used, so 'make' should be 'making'. Also, 'every every day' is repetitive; one 'every' is sufficient. 'A to do list' should be hyphenated as 'a to-do list'.

× In my opinion, the people who don't like to make a list is because they don't think it's a convenient way to align them.

✓ In my opinion, the people who don't like to make a list are because they don't think it's a convenient way to organize them.

The subject 'the people' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. Also, 'align them' is unclear; 'organize them' is more appropriate in this context.

× Let them finish their their job or work so it will give them pressure.

✓ Let them finish their job or work so it will not give them pressure.

The phrase 'give them pressure' is awkward; it is better to say 'not give them pressure' to express the intended meaning. Also, 'their their' is a repetition and should be corrected to a single 'their'.

× I prefer to make a list on my because nowadays people just carry their everyday paper and also put papers easy to lose.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays people don't usually carry paper every day, and papers are easy to lose.

The phrase 'on my' is incomplete; it should be 'on my phone'. The sentence structure is awkward and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Carry their everyday paper' is incorrect; it should be 'carry paper every day'. Also, 'put papers easy to lose' is incorrect; it should be 'papers are easy to lose'.