List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and keep it within five sentences.

例: I don't usually make a detailed list when I go shopping, but I do take quick notes on my phone to remind myself of the items I need to buy. This helps me stay organised without spending too much time planning.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more structured. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'uhm'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why your schedule helps your study.

例: As a student, I don't make lists for work, but I do create clear study schedules. These schedules help me manage my time effectively and ensure I cover all my subjects before exams.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Make sure to use correct verb forms and sentence structures. Also, provide specific reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and believe that plans often don't work out as expected. Therefore, they prefer to be more spontaneous.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward phrasing and grammar errors. Try to express your preference clearly and explain why, using linking words and specific details.

例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and helps me track my progress easily before tackling difficult tasks.

× Why I think I'm not a person who usually make a schedule or make a list when I was shopping, but I do take notes on my phone to kind of a list that to remind me what I'm going to buy in the supermarket.

✓ I think I'm not a person who usually makes a schedule or makes a list when I shop, but I do take notes on my phone as a kind of list to remind me what I'm going to buy in the supermarket.

The sentence incorrectly mixes tenses and verb forms. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'a person' (third person singular). Also, 'when I was shopping' should be 'when I shop' to maintain present tense consistency. The phrase 'to kind of a list that to remind me' is awkward and corrected to 'as a kind of list to remind me' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, from my perspective, I think some people may not like making leads or making schedules because they think it is time consuming and it may doesn't work to them, they may won't work out the plan.

✓ Well, from my perspective, I think some people may not like making lists or making schedules because they think it is time-consuming and it may not work for them; they may not work out the plan.

The sentence contains several errors: 'making leads' should be 'making lists' (likely a typo). 'It may doesn't work' is incorrect; 'doesn't' should be 'not' after 'may' to form 'may not work'. 'To them' should be 'for them' as the correct preposition. 'They may won't work out the plan' is incorrect; 'may won't' is not a valid modal verb combination and should be 'may not'.

× Well, from my perspective, I think some people may not like making leads or making schedules because they think it is time consuming and it may doesn't work to them, they may won't work out the plan.

✓ Well, from my perspective, I think some people may not like making lists or making schedules because they think it is time-consuming and it may not work for them; they may not work out the plan.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'work' in this context. The correct preposition is 'for' when indicating something is effective or suitable for someone.

× Well, from my perspective, I think some people may not like making leads or making schedules because they think it is time consuming and it may doesn't work to them, they may won't work out the plan.

✓ Well, from my perspective, I think some people may not like making lists or making schedules because they think it is time-consuming and it may not work for them; they may not work out the plan.

The modal verb 'may' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'doesn't' or 'won't'. Therefore, 'may doesn't work' and 'may won't work' are incorrect. The correct forms are 'may not work'.

× Well, from my perspective, I think some people may not like making leads or making schedules because they think it is time consuming and it may doesn't work to them, they may won't work out the plan.

✓ Well, from my perspective, I think some people may not like making lists or making schedules because they think it is time-consuming and it may not work for them; they may not work out the plan.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective before a noun or in this context to describe the activity.

× I can clearly see how well I do next before I'm doing a really hard work.

✓ I can clearly see how well I do next before I'm doing really hard work.

The phrase 'a really hard work' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. The article should be removed to correct the sentence.

× I can clearly see how well I do next before I'm doing a really hard work.

✓ I can clearly see how well I do next before I'm doing really hard work.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'really hard work' because 'work' is uncountable. Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.