List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is not very clear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, say "Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy." Also, avoid unnecessary words like "I offend you."

例: Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but a bit short and repetitive. Try to add more details and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, "Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize tasks effectively."

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize tasks effectively, which improves my productivity.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and lacks clarity. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words. For example, "I'm not sure, but in my opinion, some people think making lists wastes time because it takes extra effort."

例: I'm not sure, but in my opinion, some people think making lists wastes time because it takes extra effort and they prefer to remember things mentally.

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by adding more explanation and using linking words. For example, "I like making lists both on paper and on my phone because writing on paper feels more personal, but using my phone is more convenient when I'm on the go."

例: I like making lists both on paper and on my phone because writing on paper feels more personal, but using my phone is more convenient when I'm on the go.

× Yeah, I offend you, at least when I go to shop, because I love doing lists.

✓ Yeah, I often do, at least when I go shopping, because I love making lists.

The student used 'offend' instead of 'often', which is a vocabulary error but also affects the modal verb usage context. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the correct verb form after 'go'. 'Doing lists' is better expressed as 'making lists'. The modal verb 'do' is used to answer the question about habit.

× Yeah, actually make a list when I work because it helps me stay organized. Yeah.

✓ Yeah, I actually make a list when I work because it helps me stay organized. Yeah.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'actually make'. Adding 'I' corrects the sentence structure and subject-verb agreement.

× I don't sure about this, but in my opinion people think that by doing this is a wasting time.

✓ I'm not sure about this, but in my opinion, people think that doing this is a waste of time.

'I don't sure' is incorrect; the correct modal verb phrase is 'I'm not sure'. Also, 'a wasting time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a waste of time'. The modal verb 'am' is necessary here for the present state.

× I do make a list in both because I love writing on paper and also my phone.

✓ I do make a list on both because I love writing on paper and also on my phone.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to lists made 'on paper' or 'on a phone'. The correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'on' should be repeated before 'my phone' for clarity.