List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes I do, I think I'll make a list before shopping. Makes my mind clear. Like I won't forget what to buy and it would be faster and easier to buy things. Actually my mom often gives me tips.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I do. During the holiday I often make a list of my own previously and the schedule tells me when should I finish my homework or where to workout today. It really helps indeed.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
There are several. Some people don't like making lists because they sync lists limit them. They like to do things whatever they want, and that makes them happy. What's more, some people just don't good at making lists.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can check the lists anywhere and anytime. What's more, uh, my phone is more solid than paper and that keeps a longer time.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较为简单且有语法错误，如“Makes my mind clear”应为完整句子。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并适当使用连接词使回答更连贯。
例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it makes the shopping process faster and more organized. For example, my mom often advises me to prepare a list to avoid forgetting items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如“when should I finish”应为“when I should finish”。建议注意语序和时态，使用更自然的表达方式，并增加连接词使内容更流畅。
例: Yes, I often make a list for my work, especially during holidays. The schedule helps me know when I should finish my homework and plan my workouts. This method really helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，如“sync lists limit them”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免模糊表达，并用连接词使回答更连贯。
例: There are several reasons. Some people don't like making lists because they feel lists limit their freedom. They prefer to do things spontaneously, which makes them happier. Additionally, some people are simply not good at organizing lists.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答表达了观点，但“uh”影响流畅性，且“phone is more solid than paper”表达不准确。建议避免口头语，使用更准确的描述，并用连接词增强逻辑性。
例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can access them anytime and anywhere. Moreover, digital lists are more durable and easier to update compared to paper lists.
文法
× Makes my mind clear.
✓ It makes my mind clear.
句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。应加上主语“it”使句子完整。
× During the holiday I often make a list of my own previously and the schedule tells me when should I finish my homework or where to workout today.
✓ During the holiday I often previously make a list of my own, and the schedule tells me when I should finish my homework or where to work out today.
副词“previously”位置不当，应放在动词前；疑问句语序错误，陈述句中应为“when I should finish”，而非“when should I finish”。
× Some people don't like making lists because they sync lists limit them.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think lists limit them.
“sync”用错，应为“think”，表示“认为”。
× Some people just don't good at making lists.
✓ Some people just aren't good at making lists.
缺少系动词“are”，导致句子不完整。
× my phone is more solid than paper and that keeps a longer time.
✓ my phone is more solid than paper and that lasts longer.
“keeps a longer time”表达不自然，应使用“lasts longer”表示“持续更久”。
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