List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“before I doing something”应为“before I do something”，同时表达不够自然，且内容较为简单。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且简洁明了地回答问题。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

提案: 回答中断断续续，语句不连贯，影响理解。建议练习连贯表达，避免频繁停顿，并且用完整句子表达观点。

例: I tried making lists for my work at first, but I found they didn't help me stay organized, so I stopped using them.

提案: 回答中断断续，语句不流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，并且提供更具体的理由来支持观点。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it doesn't motivate them or improve their productivity, so they prefer to work without one.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在轻微停顿，影响流畅度。建议练习流利表达，并尝试使用更多连接词使句子更自然。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient to access and edit them whenever I need.

× I don't have the habit to make a list before I doing something so.

✓ I don't have the habit of making a list before I do something.

这里“doing”用法错误，动词短语“have the habit of”后应接动名词形式，因此应使用“making”。另外，“I doing something”结构不正确，应改为“I do something”。

× I. Found that it. Didn't make any sense.

✓ I found that it didn't make any sense.

句中“Found”首字母不应大写且句子断开不连贯，应连成一句完整的过去时态句子。

× So I just. Don't make a list. Until now.

✓ So I just don't make a list until now.

句子断开不连贯，应连成一句完整的现在时态句子，表示直到现在仍然不做某事。

× Doesn't. Help them. To finish their works or do anything.

✓ Doesn't help them to finish their work or do anything.

“works”在此处应使用不可数名词“work”，表示工作任务，而非复数形式。

× I prefer to make it on my phone because I think it's easier for me to find the list and to. Rewrite it if necessary.

✓ I prefer to make it on my phone because I think it's easier for me to find the list and rewrite it if necessary.

“to. Rewrite”中“to”后不应有句号，且“to rewrite”作为动词不定式在此处可省略“to”，使句子更流畅。