List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误，如“making a list sometimes make me”应为“makes me”。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免重复表达。

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I like to decide spontaneously. I find that making a list can sometimes slow me down.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达不清的问题，如“there are so much things”应为“there are so many things”，且“Nicholas”可能是误用，应更准确表达。建议回答时结构清晰，避免模糊。

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because I have many tasks. Making lists helps me organize my thoughts and prioritize what to do.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议回答时注意句子完整，逻辑连贯，避免断句和模糊表达。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their mind and feel confident managing without lists.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“if I make a list on my”不完整，应补充完整。建议回答时注意句子完整性和表达清晰。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I often forget to check lists on my phone, but paper lists are always visible to me.

× I found that making a list sometimes make me spend too much time deciding what to buy.

✓ I found that making a list sometimes makes me spend too much time deciding what to buy.

主语是单数形式的"making a list"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"makes"，而不是复数形式"make"。

× there are so much things I have to do in my work.

✓ there are so many things I have to do in my work.

"things"是可数名词复数，量词应使用"many"而非"much"，"much"用于不可数名词。

× Nicholas can help me to clean my mind what to do or what not to do.

✓ Nicholas can help me clear my mind about what to do or what not to do.

动词"help"后面不需要"to"，且"clean my mind"表达不准确，应为"clear my mind"，并且"about"用来引导内容。

× Maybe some people who don't want to make a list because they can handle them, their life, things in their mind, so they don't need to make lists.

✓ Maybe some people don't want to make a list because they can handle their life and things in their mind, so they don't need to make lists.

"handle them"中的"them"指代不明且多余，应直接用"handle their life and things"。

× And of course in another way maybe they follow their.

✓ And of course, in another way, maybe they follow their own way.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语，"follow their"后应补充具体内容，如"own way"。

× sometimes if I make a list on my I will forget to see it,

✓ sometimes if I make a list on my phone, I will forget to see it,

"on my"后缺少名词，完整表达应为"on my phone"。