List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达有重复和错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和主谓一致，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I like to browse and choose what appeals to me at the moment. I find this approach more flexible and enjoyable.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，完整表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and reminds me of all the tasks I need to complete. For example, it helps me remember important deadlines and prioritize my tasks effectively.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，建议减少口语化表达，注意词汇搭配和句子结构，使表达更准确自然。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexible work schedules that let them manage their time freely. This helps reduce stress and improve their productivity.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意动词形式和句子完整性，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Making a list on paper is traditional and efficient, but I prefer using my phone because it allows me to check and update the list anytime and anywhere. Using a phone is more convenient and environmentally friendly.

× I prefer browsing around the store and see what catches my eyes or what I feel like to eat at that moment.

✓ I prefer browsing around the store and seeing what catches my eyes or what I feel like eating at that moment.

动词prefer后面接动名词形式，因此see应改为seeing，feel like后面也应接动名词形式，因此to eat应改为 eating。

× I I found I found this way more flexible and enjoyable than sticking.

✓ I found this way more flexible and enjoyable than sticking.

句中重复了“I found”，应删除多余部分。

× it helps me to stay organized and remind the All Star all task that I need to complete during the day.

✓ it helps me to stay organized and reminds me of all the tasks that I need to complete during the day.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s变为reminds；另外，'remind the All Star all task'表达不清，应改为'reminds me of all the tasks'。

× For example, it remind me of important deadlines and allows me to prioritize my tasks which make.

✓ For example, it reminds me of important deadlines and allows me to prioritize my tasks which make me more efficient.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s变为reminds；句子不完整，补充完整句意。

× I think some people don't like making this because they prefer flexible work, uh, that allows them to arrange their time more freely.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer flexible work that allows them to arrange their time more freely.

making后应接复数名词lists，而非this。

× This way they can be less a stress and then and can be more productive.

✓ This way they can be less stressed and then can be more productive.

less a stress表达错误，应改为less stressed，表示减少压力。

× but I prefer to use my because I can allows myself to check and update the list any time and anywhere.

✓ but I prefer to use my phone because it allows me to check and update the list anytime and anywhere.

my后应接名词phone；can后不加allows，应为it allows；myself用法不当，改为me。

× Using a phone is more convenient and environmental friendly.

✓ Using a phone is more convenient and environmentally friendly.

environmental是形容词，修饰friendly应使用副词形式environmentally。