List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me organize what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items, so I can stick to my budget effectively.

提案: Your answer has good content but lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and explain your points logically using linking words like 'however' or 'so'.

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay focused. However, I used to lose my paper lists, so now I use an app called 'Worked' which reminds me of my tasks and helps me organize my work efficiently.

提案: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer expression. Avoid double negatives and repeated words. Use linking words like 'because' and 'but' properly to make your answer coherent. Also, try to be more specific in your explanation.

例: People have different opinions, but many dislike making lists because they think it is unnecessary and useless. However, I believe lists are very helpful as they allow us to organize and adjust our tasks according to our schedule.

提案: Your answer conveys the idea but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use simpler and clearer sentences, and link your ideas logically with words like 'because' and 'while'.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because the app sends notifications to remind me of pending tasks, while paper lists can get lost or forgotten easily.

× Everyone have their own opinion and perspective but most people do not like to make list because they felt that it is a necessary thing and useless but but in my opinion the list works very well and helps us to organize and customize our thing according to the our schedule.

✓ Everyone has their own opinion and perspective but most people do not like to make lists because they feel that it is an unnecessary and useless thing but in my opinion the list works very well and helps us to organize and customize our things according to our schedule.

The subject 'Everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'. 'List' should be plural 'lists' to match the plural subject 'most people'. 'Felt' should be present tense 'feel' to match the present context. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to refer to multiple items. Also, 'the our schedule' is incorrect; it should be 'our schedule'. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and noun number consistency.

× It helps me to organize the things that I want.

✓ It helps me organize the things that I want.

The verb 'helps' is correct for third person singular. However, 'to organize' can be simplified to 'organize' after 'helps' for natural English usage. This is not a strict grammar error but an improvement for fluency.

× Yes definitely I do make a shopping list whenever I am going for a shopping.

✓ Yes definitely I do make a shopping list whenever I am going shopping.

The phrase 'going for a shopping' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'going shopping' without the preposition 'for' and article 'a'. This is a common prepositional error.

× Also it helps me to reduce the excessive shopping of unwanted things and also it it maintain a boundary of my budget as it helps me a lot.

✓ Also it helps me reduce excessive shopping of unwanted things and it maintains a boundary for my budget as it helps me a lot.

The pronoun 'it it' is repeated mistakenly. 'Maintain' should be 'maintains' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Of my budget' should be 'for my budget' to correctly express purpose. These corrections fix pronoun repetition, subject-verb agreement, and preposition use.

× Yes, I do make A to do list for my work.

✓ Yes, I do make a to-do list for my work.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' as it is a compound noun. Proper article usage and hyphenation improve clarity.

× But after some while I do start facing a problem with my list because I forgot where I put it.

✓ But after some while I start facing a problem with my list because I forgot where I put it.

The phrase 'do start' is unnecessary in present tense; 'start' suffices. 'Forgot' is correctly in past tense referring to a past event. The sentence mixes present and past tenses; better to keep consistent. However, since the problem started in the past, 'started' would be better: 'I started facing a problem'. This correction aligns tense usage.

× So now currently I'm using a app which called worked and I used to do.

✓ So now currently I'm using an app called 'Worked' and I use it to do my tasks.

The article 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an'. The phrase 'which called worked' is incorrect; it should be 'called Worked'. 'I used to do' is unclear; corrected to 'I use it to do my tasks' for clarity. These fix article use and pronoun clarity.

× I used to spend most of time whenever I was free.

✓ I used to spend most of the time whenever I was free.

The phrase 'most of time' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'time'. This is a common error with quantifiers and articles.

× I organize all my work.

✓ I organize all my work.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× most people do not like to make list because they felt that it is a necessary thing and useless

✓ most people do not like to make lists because they feel that it is an unnecessary and useless thing

'List' should be plural 'lists' to match 'most people'. 'Felt' should be present tense 'feel' to match the present context. 'Necessary' is opposite in meaning to 'useless'; 'unnecessary' fits better here. These corrections improve number agreement and word choice.

× helps us to organize and customize our thing according to the our schedule.

✓ helps us to organize and customize our things according to our schedule.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to refer to multiple items. 'The our schedule' is incorrect; it should be 'our schedule'. These corrections fix pronoun and article usage.

× I do prefer to make a list on phone as it helps as in the application they you do offer a notification which kept you reminding the work was remaining

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone as the application offers notifications that keep reminding you of the remaining work

'On phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. 'They you do offer' is incorrect; corrected to 'the application offers'. 'Kept you reminding' should be 'keep reminding' to maintain present tense and correct verb form. These corrections improve preposition use and verb forms.

× but in the case of paper it sometimes got lost and it also sometimes get forgotten.

✓ but in the case of paper, it sometimes gets lost and is also sometimes forgotten.

'Got lost' should be 'gets lost' to maintain present tense. 'It also sometimes get forgotten' should be 'is also sometimes forgotten' to use passive voice correctly. Adding a comma after 'paper' improves sentence clarity. These corrections fix tense and conjunction use.