List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议练习正确使用人称代词和动词形式，并且回答时要更直接地回应问题。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I find shopping enjoyable and prefer to choose things spontaneously.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构重复，建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意单复数形式的正确使用。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It helps me organize my tasks, such as finishing homework, reading books, and doing housework efficiently.

提案: 表达不够准确，语法错误较多。建议学习如何用正确的句型表达原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they are too busy and feel it takes too much time.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达混乱的问题，建议练习简洁明了地表达偏好，并避免无关内容。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can do it anytime, even when I'm lying in bed.

× No, I don't make her list when my go to shop because I think shopping is a is a phrase and happy things I want to go shopping by my favorite shop.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I think shopping is a pleasure and happy thing. I want to go shopping at my favorite shop.

这里“her list”错误，应该用不定冠词“a list”；“my go to shop”中“my”应为主格“I”，且动词应为“go shopping”；“phrase”应为“pleasure”；“happy things”应为单数“happy thing”；“go shopping by my favorite shop”应为“go shopping at my favorite shop”。这些都是代词使用错误和词汇错误。

× Yes I do. I usually make a list for my works. I usually have a plan to finish my homework and have a schedule to help me do my important things such as reading some books and doing some housework.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually make a list for my work. I usually have a plan to finish my homework and have a schedule to help me do my important things such as reading some books and doing some housework.

“works”在这里应为不可数名词“work”，表示工作任务。

× In my opinions, I think most people think make a list is matters because they are so busy so they don't have time to make a list.

✓ In my opinion, I think most people think making a list matters because they are so busy that they don't have time to make a list.

“opinions”应为单数“opinion”；“think make a list is matters”结构错误，应改为“think making a list matters”；“so busy so”应为“so busy that”。

× I like to make a list, make list in my phones because I like lying down in my bed and play my phones.

✓ I like to make a list, make lists on my phone because I like lying down in my bed and playing on my phone.

“make list”应为“make lists”；“in my phones”应为“on my phone”；“play my phones”应为“playing on my phone”，动词形式和介词使用错误。

× I will spend a little 10s to make a list in my phone's.

✓ I will spend about 10 seconds to make a list on my phone.

“a little 10s”表达不正确，应为“about 10 seconds”；“in my phone's”应为“on my phone”，且不需要所有格。

× I think big news in the paper so.

✓ I think big news is in the paper.

句子缺少谓语动词，应补充“is”，使句子完整。