List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免语法错误，同时可以用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I buy everything I need. It also helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse purchases. Additionally, I categorize items to make shopping more efficient.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，并用连接词使内容更连贯，同时具体说明清单如何帮助工作效率。

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because I have many tasks daily. This helps me prioritize and complete my work efficiently every day.

提案: 回答表达不清且有语法错误，建议用更准确的句子表达原因，并提供具体细节，避免重复和模糊的表述。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and troublesome. They may feel that it limits their flexibility or adds unnecessary pressure.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构简单，建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient to access them anytime. For instance, unlike paper lists, I don't have to carry extra items; my phone is always with me.

× Yeah, I always make a list when I go shop to ensure that I can buy something I want and it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse shopping.

✓ Yeah, I always make a list when I go shopping to ensure that I can buy something I want and it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse shopping.

动词go后面接动名词形式表示去做某事，go后面不能直接接动词原形shop，应该用shopping。

× I always category some items and keep.

✓ I always categorize some items and keep them.

category是名词，动词形式应为categorize，且句子缺少宾语，需补充them。

× Yeah, I always make a list in my work because I have a lot of things to do every day doing this.

✓ Yeah, I always make a list at work because I have a lot of things to do every day. Doing this,

表示在工作场所应使用介词at而非in；句子结构不完整，需断句并调整。

× I can know I should finish what work every day.

✓ I can know what work I should finish every day.

句子结构混乱，疑问词what应放在should前面，调整语序使句子通顺。

× I think it may be they think making list is very troublesome.

✓ I think it may be that they think making lists is very troublesome.

缺少连词that，且list应为复数lists，表示泛指。

× Some people may think making these days difficult for them to do something more efficiently.

✓ Some people may think making lists these days is difficult for them to do something more efficiently.

句子缺少谓语动词is，且making后应接复数名词lists，调整语序使句子完整。

× I would like to make my list on phone because it is very convenient to check them.

✓ I would like to make my list on my phone because it is very convenient to check them.

表示使用手机时应加上物主代词my，on phone不完整。

× For example, if I write my list on paper, I need to bring my paper everywhere, but if on my phone I just need to bring my phone.

✓ For example, if I write my list on paper, I need to bring my paper everywhere, but if on my phone, I just need to bring my phone.

句子中if后缺少主语I，需补充以保持句子完整。