List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，如“have to making”应为“have to make”，且句子结构不够简洁。建议简化句子，避免冗长，同时注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and choose only the necessary items when there are many options.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，如“which really helps me to get”未完成。建议回答时注意句子完整，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I often make a list before doing homework. It helps me organize my thoughts and prioritize difficult tasks, like solving math problems when I have the most energy, which improves my efficiency.

提案: 表达不够自然，存在用词和语法错误，如“reduce your over efficiency”不合适。建议使用更准确的词汇，表达更清晰。

例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time and may distract them, reducing their overall efficiency when focusing on tasks.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“rather than on a form”应为“rather than on my phone”，且句子末尾未完成。建议注意句子完整性和准确用词。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me remember better and avoid distractions from videos or apps on my phone.

× Well yes, actually whenever I have to making a list before I do some shopping, it can always provide me with a more clear mind and helps me to choose the necessities to buy when I have a variety to choose.

✓ Well yes, actually whenever I have to make a list before I do some shopping, it can always provide me with a clearer mind and helps me to choose the necessities to buy when I have a variety to choose.

动词后面接动名词（-ing形式）时，通常是作为主语或宾语，但在这里“have to”后面应接动词原形，因此应改为“make”。另外，'more clear'应改为比较级形式'clearer'。

× Well yes, actually whenever I have to making a list before I do some shopping, it can always provide me with a more clear mind and helps me to choose the necessities to buy when I have a variety to choose.

✓ Well yes, actually whenever I have to make a list before I do some shopping, it can always provide me with a clearer mind and helps me to choose the necessities to buy when I have a variety to choose.

'a more clear mind'中，'clear'是形容词，比较级应为'clearer'，而且这里用比较级更合适。

× Well, probably, as I usually make a list before starting my homework or dealing with difficult tasks. This really helps me organize my thoughts clearly and prioritize to the most challenging work, such as finishing the most difficult mathematic problems when I have the most energy, which really helps me to get.

✓ Well, probably, as I usually make a list before starting my homework or dealing with difficult tasks. This really helps me organize my thoughts clearly and prioritize the most challenging work, such as finishing the most difficult math problems when I have the most energy, which really helps me to get it done.

'prioritize to the most challenging work'中，'prioritize'后不需要介词'to'，应直接接宾语。'mathematic'应为'math'或'mathematics'。句尾不完整，补充'get it done'使句子完整。

× Well, from my perspective some people might be unwilling to list all the things before starting their task or dealing with some important problems. The main reason is that it will always cause a lot of time and this might reduce your over efficiency because it can distract them from focusing on the task at hand.

✓ Well, from my perspective some people might be unwilling to list all the things before starting their task or dealing with some important problems. The main reason is that it will always take a lot of time and this might reduce your overall efficiency because it can distract them from focusing on the task at hand.

'cause a lot of time'用词不当，应改为'take a lot of time'。'over efficiency'应为'overall efficiency'，表示整体效率。

× Well, I would prefer to write it down on paper rather than on a form. The main reason is that as a Senior High School student, I always have a lot of paperwork to do, so that writing things down on the paper can always helps me to save my time and also remember there more clearly rather than on my phone because I can always distract by some short videos or.

✓ Well, I would prefer to write it down on paper rather than on a phone. The main reason is that as a Senior High School student, I always have a lot of paperwork to do, so writing things down on paper can always help me save time and also remember them more clearly rather than on my phone because I can always be distracted by some short videos or other things.

'on a form'应为'on a phone'，符合上下文。'can always helps'中'helps'应为原形'help'。'save my time'中'my'可省略。'remember there'应为'remember them'。'I can always distract'应为'I can always be distracted'，被动语态更合适。