List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“after one shopping”不符合英语习惯，应改为“after shopping”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, I always make a list to ensure that I buy everything I need during my shopping trips.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（'least'应为'list'），且表达不够清晰。建议注意拼写准确，句子结构更完整，表达更具体。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work, including both my homework and housework, because it helps me organize my tasks and complete them efficiently.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不自然，如“it is a trouble”应为“it is troublesome”，且句子结构不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整的句子表达观点。

例: I think some people find making lists troublesome and believe it might slow down their plans, but I personally disagree with that.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如主谓不一致（'make'应为'making'或'makes'），表达不够自然。建议注意语法一致性，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: In my opinion, making a list on paper makes me feel more connected to my life, and writing it down helps me remember things better.

× Yes, I always make a list to make sure that everything I need to do is done after one shopping.

✓ Yes, I always make a list to make sure that everything I need to do is done after shopping.

“shopping”是不可数名词，前面不需要加“one”。这里使用“one shopping”是不正确的，应该直接用“shopping”。

× As for me the least is the best thing to make sure that I do everything well.

✓ As for me, the list is the best thing to make sure that I do everything well.

“least”是“最少”的意思，和句意不符，应该是“list”（清单）。这里是拼写错误，导致意思不明确。

× I think they may feel it is a trouble and it delays your plan, but As for me, I don't think so.

✓ I think they may feel it is trouble and it delays your plan, but as for me, I don't think so.

“trouble”是不可数名词，前面不需要加不定冠词“a”。另外，“As”不应大写，应该是“as”。

× In my opinion, make a list on paper make me feel full of my life and it gives me a chance to write my list down.

✓ In my opinion, making a list on paper makes me feel full of my life and it gives me a chance to write my list down.

主语是动名词短语“making a list”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“makes”。原句中“make”用法错误，导致主谓不一致。