List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构有些混乱。建议注意时态和句子完整性，避免断句不清。

例: Yes, I usually make a detailed shopping list before I go to the store so that I can check if I have bought everything I need.

提案: 回答中存在重复和时态错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致性，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I usually make a list in the morning before going to work so that I know what tasks I need to complete, and I can check them off as I finish.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用更简洁的句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Some people might find making lists complicated and time-consuming, so they prefer not to make to-do lists.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，注意句子结构和时态，避免重复。

例: I prefer to make to-do lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and it helps me stay organized without using paper.

× I usually make a detail list about what I need to buy before I get to the stores so that I could check whether I have. Bought enough things I need.

✓ I usually make a detailed list about what I need to buy before I get to the stores so that I can check whether I have bought enough things I need.

这里“detail list”应为“detailed list”，因为“detail”是名词，形容词形式应为“detailed”。另外，“could”改为“can”更符合现在时态的表达。

× I usually make a detail list about what I need to buy before I get to the stores so that I could check whether I have. Bought enough things I need.

✓ I usually make a detailed list about what I need to buy before I get to the stores so that I can check whether I have bought enough things I need.

“Bought”是过去式，前面有“have”应使用过去分词形式，构成现在完成时态，表示动作已经完成。

× I usually make a list in the morning before I get to the company so that I could I could know what I needed to do today and I could check if I had done everything I need.

✓ I usually make a list in the morning before I get to the company so that I can know what I need to do today and I can check if I have done everything I need.

“could”表示过去能力或可能性，这里描述的是习惯性动作，应使用“can”。“needed”应为现在时“need”，因为是当天的任务。

× I usually make a list in the morning before I get to the company so that I could I could know what I needed to do today and I could check if I had done everything I need.

✓ I usually make a list in the morning before I get to the company so that I can know what I need to do today and I can check if I have done everything I need.

“needed”应改为“need”，因为描述的是当天的任务，使用一般现在时更合适。

× I usually make a list in the morning before I get to the company so that I could I could know what I needed to do today and I could check if I had done everything I need.

✓ I usually make a list in the morning before I get to the company so that I can know what I need to do today and I can check if I have done everything I need.

“had done”应改为“have done”，因为这里是现在完成时，表示动作对现在有影响。

× I think it worked a lot.

✓ I think it works a lot.

“think”是现在时，后面应接现在时态“works”，表示现在的情况。

× I think these people maybe think it's very complex to think about the whole things they need to do.

✓ I think these people maybe think it's very complex to think about all the things they need to do.

“whole things”不正确，应使用“all the things”表示所有的事情。

× Besides, I think they may be they may be thinking a waste of time for them to do these things so that they don't like to make A to do list.

✓ Besides, I think they may be thinking it's a waste of time for them to do these things so that they don't like to make a to-do list.

“may be thinking a waste of time”缺少“it's”，应为“may be thinking it's a waste of time”。

× Besides, I think they may be they may be thinking a waste of time for them to do these things so that they don't like to make A to do list.

✓ Besides, I think they may be thinking it's a waste of time for them to do these things so that they don't like to make a to-do list.

“A to do list”中“to do list”应连写为“to-do list”，且冠词应小写。

× Well, I prefer make A to do list on my phone because I don't have papers everywhere, but I could have my phone every every time and everywhere.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a to-do list on my phone because I don't have papers everywhere, but I can have my phone every time and everywhere.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”，而非直接动词原形。“could”表示过去能力，改为“can”表示现在能力。

× Well, I prefer make A to do list on my phone because I don't have papers everywhere, but I could have my phone every every time and everywhere.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a to-do list on my phone because I don't have papers everywhere, but I can have my phone every time and everywhere.

“A to do list”应为“a to-do list”，且冠词小写。

× Especially I like to record to do things in the morning in the.

✓ Especially, I like to record to-do things in the morning.

句子末尾“in the.”不完整，应删除或补充完整。这里删除不完整部分，使句子完整。