List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy by using correct verb forms and articles. For example, say "when I shop" instead of "when I shopping" and "it helps me" instead of "it help me." Also, try to add a linking phrase to make the answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the most important items I need to buy.

提案: Use consistent verb tenses and clearer linking words. For example, use present tense "helps" instead of "helped" and use linking words like "so" or "which" to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I have a study schedule, and it works well for me because it helps me decide what I need to do next and what tasks are left.

提案: Improve sentence structure and clarity by using proper grammar and linking words. For example, say "Because many people are busy with their tasks, they don't have time to make lists, and they find it annoying, so they just keep everything in their minds."

例: Many people don't like making lists because they are busy with their tasks and find it annoying, so they prefer to remember everything in their minds.

提案: Clarify your ideas and use correct expressions. Avoid unclear phrases like "I just no doubt what I don't know." Instead, explain clearly why you prefer your phone and use linking words for coherence.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I use it frequently, and it's convenient to quickly note down the things I need to buy.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I shopping and it help me to recall what I need the most.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I am shopping and it helps me to recall what I need the most.

The verb 'shopping' needs to be in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense ('I am shopping'). Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I shopping and it help me to recall what I need the most.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I am shopping and it helps me to recall what I need the most.

The verb 'help' must be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I have a study schedule and it works a lot for me because it helped me to think what I have to do next and what I have to do left.

✓ Yes, I have a study schedule and it works a lot for me because it helps me to think about what I have to do next and what I have left to do.

The verb 'helped' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'helps' to match 'I have'. Also, 'think what' should be 'think about what' for correct preposition usage, and 'what I have to do left' is better expressed as 'what I have left to do'.

× Yes, I have a study schedule and it works a lot for me because it helped me to think what I have to do next and what I have to do left.

✓ Yes, I have a study schedule and it works a lot for me because it helps me to think about what I have to do next and what I have left to do.

The verb 'think' is usually followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to considering something. Also, the phrase 'what I have to do left' is awkward; 'what I have left to do' is the correct order.

× Because a lot of people busy doing their stuff and they don't have time to make a list because they think it's annoying for them and they only keep that in their brain.

✓ Because a lot of people are busy doing their stuff and they don't have time to make a list since they think it's annoying, so they only keep it in their brain.

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' after 'people' to form the correct present continuous tense 'are busy'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and can be improved by replacing the second 'because' with 'since' and adding a comma before 'so'. 'That' should be 'it' to correctly refer to 'a list'.

× Because a lot of people busy doing their stuff and they don't have time to make a list because they think it's annoying for them and they only keep that in their brain.

✓ Because a lot of people are busy doing their stuff and they don't have time to make a list since they think it's annoying, so they only keep it in their brain.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used to refer to 'a list'; the correct pronoun is 'it'.

× Because a lot of people busy doing their stuff and they don't have time to make a list because they think it's annoying for them and they only keep that in their brain.

✓ Because a lot of people are busy doing their stuff and they don't have time to make a list since they think it's annoying, so they only keep it in their brain.

The phrase 'annoying for them' is unnatural; it is better to say 'annoying' without 'for them' or 'annoying to them'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use a lot and I just no doubt what I don't know on my phone and I just note down that things that I have to buy on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use it a lot and I just note down what I don't know on my phone, and I just note down the things that I have to buy on my phone.

The phrase 'I use a lot' is missing the object 'it' referring to 'my phone'. The phrase 'I just no doubt what I don't know' is incorrect; it should be 'I just note down what I don't know'. Also, 'that things' should be 'the things' to correctly specify the items.