List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，并且避免重复和语法错误。可以尝试先给出一个主题句，然后用具体细节支持。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget things. However, when I shop, I often buy more items than those on my list because I see things that catch my interest.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和语法结构，并且用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list before work. However, it doesn't always work because I often can't finish all the tasks on the list, which slows down my progress.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to create a realistic list that they can complete. Others may prefer a more flexible approach rather than following a strict list.

提案: 回答中有语法和用词错误，表达不够清晰。建议练习正确使用介词和时态，并且用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: Well, I think it depends on the situation. When I study, I usually make a list on paper. However, when I go out or travel, I prefer to make a list on my phone for convenience.

× The thing that I want to buy a butcher, when I was shop, I.

✓ The thing that I want to buy is at the butcher when I shop.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，导致句意不清。应补充动词并调整词序，使句子完整通顺。

× I. Always want to buy more than the list because I. Think.

✓ I always want to buy more than the list because I think so.

句中断句不完整，缺少连贯的表达。应将断句合并，保持现在时态一致。

× However, it don't, doesn't always work because I usually can't finish the list.

✓ However, it doesn't always work because I usually can't finish the list.

主语it为第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用doesn't而非don't。

× I often slow down the list.

✓ I often slow down when working through the list.

原句结构不完整，缺少明确的动作对象或补充说明，导致表达不清。应补充说明使句子完整。

× Maybe some people can't. Do a good list that they can finish.

✓ Maybe some people can't make a good list that they can finish.

情态动词can't后不应直接跟动词原形，需使用动词make构成完整短语。

× The others may be cant. Think it is? Freestyle is better than making a.

✓ The others may think that freestyle is better than making a list.

情态动词may后应接动词原形think，且句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× If I, start study, I usually make a list in the people.

✓ If I start studying, I usually make a list on paper.

动词start后应接动名词studying，且介词使用错误，应为on paper而非in the people。

× However, when I was go out and should do something such as travel, maybe I do it in the phone in my.

✓ However, when I go out and need to do something such as travel, maybe I do it on my phone.

时态错误，was go应改为go，should do用need to更合适，介词错误，in the phone应为on my phone。