List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了购物时列清单的习惯，但语言不够流畅，句子结构不完整，且有语法错误。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句和语法错误，同时使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything. It also helps me stick to my budget and avoid impulse buying. Additionally, I categorize items by store sections to shop more efficiently, and I usually use a list app on my phone.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议避免重复词汇，使用正确的词汇和语法，并用连接词丰富内容，使表达更流畅。

例: Absolutely, I often make a to-do list for my work. For example, I list my daily tasks using a list app, which I find very convenient and efficient.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少具体细节和逻辑连接。建议明确表达观点，补充具体原因，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Actually, some people dislike making lists because it feels like they are still working or studying even during their holidays. They prefer to relax without planning every detail.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议练习完整句子表达，注意主谓一致和时态，同时用连接词连接观点，使表达更自然。

例: Actually, I prefer making lists by hand. The main reason is that I enjoy writing on paper because it helps me concentrate better. Also, I believe that notes on paper won't disappear like digital ones might.

× The important that helps me start within my budget and avoid imposed buying.

✓ That is important because it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。应补充完整句子，使表达清晰。

× I usually categorize items by sections of the store for efficiency and I use. List app.

✓ I usually categorize items by sections of the store for efficiency, and I use a list app.

原句中“and I use. List app.”断句错误，且缺少冠词“a”，应连贯表达并加冠词。

× I usually list my one day tasks tasks by using a list IP.

✓ I usually list my one-day tasks by using a list app.

“one day tasks tasks”重复且缺少连字符，应为“one-day tasks”，且“list IP”应为“list app”。

× Actually, I think there are many reasons for people don't like making lists.

✓ Actually, I think there are many reasons why people don't like making lists.

“reasons for people”用法不当，应使用“reasons why people”表示原因。

× if you make a listing holidays, it looks like you still work at a company and studying a school, so.

✓ If you make a list during holidays, it looks like you are still working at a company and studying at school.

“make a listing holidays”表达错误，应为“make a list during holidays”；“studying a school”缺少介词“at”。

× Actually I've for making a list by my hand.

✓ Actually, I prefer making a list by hand.

“I've for making”表达错误，应为“I prefer making”；“by my hand”应为“by hand”。

× It feel like it makes me more concentrated on.

✓ It feels like it helps me concentrate more.

“feel”主语是第三人称单数，应用“feels”；“concentrated on”用法不当，应为“concentrate more”。

× And another reason is that I think writing something on the paper is never disappear.

✓ Another reason is that I think writing something on paper never disappears.

“is never disappear”语法错误，应改为“never disappears”，且“on the paper”中“the”可省略。