List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答比较自然且直接，但可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容，比如说明你如何制作购物清单或它带来的好处。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid forgetting important items. For instance, I usually categorize items by sections in the supermarket, which makes shopping more efficient.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，建议注意时态和句子结构，同时可以用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me keep track of unfinished tasks. Moreover, it improves my productivity by reminding me of priorities.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不够准确的问题，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer a casual lifestyle. They might feel that strict schedules limit their freedom and enjoy having a more flexible daily routine.

提案: 回答较好，但可以更具体地说明为什么手机或笔记本更方便，并注意复数形式的使用。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone or in my notebook because it's easier to edit items. For example, if I forget something, I can quickly add it to my list without any hassle.

× I make A to do list for my work because I think it can help me to keep track of my tasks haven't completed and I think it definitely works well for me.

✓ I make a to-do list for my work because I think it can help me keep track of my tasks I haven't completed and I think it definitely works well for me.

这里的错误是“tasks haven't completed”缺少了关系代词“that”或“which”，导致句子结构不完整。应改为“tasks I haven't completed”表示“我还没有完成的任务”。另外，“A to do list”中的“A”应小写为“a”，且“to do list”应加连字符变为“to-do list”。

× they might enjoy in the flexible daily routine.

✓ they might enjoy the flexible daily routine.

动词“enjoy”后面不需要介词“in”，直接加宾语即可。因此应去掉“in”，改为“enjoy the flexible daily routine”。

× I think its easier to edit items.

✓ I think it's easier to edit items.

“its”是物主代词，表示“它的”，而这里应使用“it's”，是“it is”的缩写，表示“它更容易”。这是代词和缩写的混淆错误。