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Part 1

試験官

Do you make a list when you shop?

受験者

Yes, I make a list when I am shopping because I think it can helps me to remember all the items I need.

試験官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

受験者

Yes, I make a list for my work because I think it can help me to check off the unfinished tasks all the time. Yes, it definitely works well for me.

試験官

Why don't some people like making lists?

受験者

I think these people prefer a casual lifestyle and they don't want to be controlled by the schedules they might enjoy in the flexible daily routine.

試験官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

受験者

I prefer to make a list on my phone or in my notebook because I think it's easier to edit items. For example, if I forgot something, I can add them in my lists quickly.

評価

総合

総合: 6.0流暢さと一貫性: 6.5発音: 6.0文法: 6.0語彙: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

スコア: 75.0

提案: 你的回答表达了观点,但有语法错误(如“can helps”应为“can help”),且句子结构较简单。建议注意动词形式的正确使用,并尝试用更自然的表达方式。

: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

スコア: 80.0

提案: 回答较完整,但表达略显重复,且“check off the unfinished tasks all the time”表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达,并避免重复。

: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me keep track of tasks I haven't completed yet, and it definitely improves my productivity.

Why don't some people like making lists?

スコア: 78.0

提案: 回答内容较好,但句子结构稍显复杂且不够流畅。建议简化句子结构,使用更自然的连接词,使表达更清晰。

: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more relaxed lifestyle and don't want to be restricted by strict schedules.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

スコア: 82.0

提案: 回答内容具体且有例子,但有小的语法错误(如“forgot”应为“forget”,“them”应为“it”),且“in my lists”应为“to my list”。建议注意时态和代词的正确使用。

: I prefer to make lists on my phone or in my notebook because it's easier to edit items. For example, if I forget something, I can quickly add it to my list.

文法

Third person singular issue

× Yes, I make a list when I am shopping because I think it can helps me to remember all the items I need.

Yes, I make a list when I am shopping because I think it can help me to remember all the items I need.

动词help在这里是第三人称单数can的后面,助动词can后面动词用原形,不能用helps。应改为help。

Singular and plural issue

× For example, if I forgot something, I can add them in my lists quickly.

For example, if I forgot something, I can add it to my list quickly.

something是单数,代词应使用it而非them;list是单数,前面用my lists不合适,应改为my list。

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