List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但有些句子结构不够自然，且有重复表达。建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意冠词的使用。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go out. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items, which saves me time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，且内容重复。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并提供更具体的细节。

例: Yes, I make lists for my work regularly. They help me prioritize tasks and avoid wasting time on unimportant activities, so I can be more efficient.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议明确表达观点，使用更准确的词汇和句子结构。

例: Some people dislike making lists because unexpected events can disrupt their plans, making it hard to complete everything on the list.

提案: 回答较好，但部分表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的连接词和表达方式，使回答更流畅。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to edit. However, when I'm feeling creative, I like using a paper planner because it looks nicer and feels more personal.

× I usually make A to do list before I go shopping, which helps me organize and ensures that I won't forget any important items when I go shopping.

✓ I usually make a to-do list before I go shopping, which helps me organize and ensures that I won't forget any important items when I go shopping.

这里的“a”应该是小写，且“to do list”应写作“to-do list”，因为这是固定短语。冠词使用错误属于文章错误。

× Making a list often helps me, saves my time and prevents me from doing unnecessary things.

✓ Making a list often helps me, saves my time, and prevents me from doing unnecessary things.

句子中缺少逗号，导致连接词“and”前的并列结构不清晰。虽然这不是严格的语法错误，但为了表达清晰，建议加逗号。

× And it helps me stay organized and ensure that I don't forget any important.

✓ And it helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't forget anything important.

这里“helps”后面应接第三人称单数动词“ensures”，且“any important”缺少名词，应改为“anything important”。句子结构不完整。

× I think the reason is making a list sometimes may meet some accidents so that they can't finish their lists.

✓ I think the reason is that making a list sometimes may encounter some accidents, so they can't finish their lists.

“the reason is making a list”缺少连接词“that”，且“may meet some accidents”表达不自然，应改为“may encounter some accidents”。句子结构不完整。

× Actually, I prefer using my cell phone to make plans.

✓ Actually, I prefer to use my cell phone to make plans.

动词“prefer”后应接不定式“to use”，而不是动名词“using”。这是介词使用错误。