List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте избыточных слов и ошибок, например, "a listing" лучше заменить на "a list". Также стоит использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember exactly what I need. This way, I don't waste time thinking about what to buy and can shop more efficiently.

提案: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать более простые и понятные предложения, а также связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay productive. First, I write down the tasks I need to complete today, so I can focus on them and finish my work efficiently.

提案: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и грамматику. Используйте более точные выражения и связующие слова для плавности речи.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they don't know how to do it properly. Also, they might not realize that lists can help them stay organized and focused.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать более четкие и связные предложения, избегать повторов.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because my handwriting is often hard to read. Using my phone makes it easier to organize and access my lists anytime.

× Actually, to be honest, I always do a listing when I go to the shopping or just to the store because it feels more comfortable.

✓ Actually, to be honest, I always make a list when I go shopping or just to the store because it feels more comfortable.

The phrase 'do a listing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'make a list'. Also, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' is followed by the activity 'shopping' without 'to the'. So, 'go shopping' is correct. These corrections improve naturalness and grammatical accuracy.

× Actually, to be honest, I always do a listing when I go to the shopping or just to the store because it feels more comfortable.

✓ Actually, to be honest, I always make a list when I go shopping or just to the store because it feels more comfortable.

The phrase 'go to the shopping' incorrectly uses the definite article 'the' before 'shopping'. 'Shopping' is an uncountable noun here and does not require 'the'. The correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× When you have specific items which you need to buy, you don't have to think about that because you have a ready instructions.

✓ When you have specific items which you need to buy, you don't have to think about that because you have ready instructions.

The word 'instructions' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' before 'ready instructions' corrects the quantifier usage.

× Even I can say that make a list is one of the important factors of productivity in your work because you first have to know the purpose of your today's sessions of work.

✓ I can even say that making a list is one of the important factors of productivity in your work because you first have to know the purpose of your work sessions today.

The phrase 'Even I can say that make a list' is awkward and ungrammatical. 'I can even say that making a list' is correct. Also, 'your today's sessions of work' is incorrect; 'your work sessions today' is the proper order and phrasing. These corrections improve pronoun and sentence structure usage.

× Even I can say that make a list is one of the important factors of productivity in your work because you first have to know the purpose of your today's sessions of work.

✓ I can even say that making a list is one of the important factors of productivity in your work because you first have to know the purpose of your work sessions today.

The verb 'make' should be in the gerund form 'making' when used as a subject in this context.

× And if you know that purpose, you just write it into the list.

✓ And if you know that purpose, you just write it on the list.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to writing something on a list. This corrects the sentence structure and preposition usage.

× And today you need to do it so you know it will.

✓ And today you need to do it, so you know you will.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding a comma and completing the phrase to 'so you know you will' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× To be honest, it may be because most of people don't know how to correctly make a list and they even don't try it.

✓ To be honest, it may be because most people don't know how to correctly make a list and they don't even try it.

The phrase 'most of people' is incorrect; it should be 'most people'. Also, 'they even don't try it' is awkward; the correct word order is 'they don't even try it'.

× They don't know why is it important and why it helps them to stay organized and focused.

✓ They don't know why it is important and why it helps them to stay organized and focused.

In indirect questions, the word order should be subject + verb, not verb + subject. So 'why is it important' should be 'why it is important'.

× Almost all the people who I know, they don't understand my handwriting and also I don't understand my own sometimes.

✓ Almost all the people I know don't understand my handwriting, and sometimes I don't understand my own either.

The phrase 'who I know, they don't' is redundant; 'people I know don't' is sufficient. Also, 'my own' refers to handwriting, so adding 'either' clarifies the meaning. The sentence is restructured for clarity and pronoun correctness.

× So I prepared to the phone because it it is better.

✓ So I prefer to use my phone because it is better.

The phrase 'I prepared to the phone' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I prefer to use my phone'. Also, 'it it is better' contains a repeated word. Correcting these improves sentence structure and clarity.