List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但有些重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的连接词。

例: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me distinguish between essential and non-essential items, preventing me from overspending on less important things.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但有语法重复和表达不够流畅的问题，建议减少重复词汇，使用更连贯的句子。

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because as a student, I have many tasks daily. Making a list helps me know my next steps clearly and keeps me organized, which improves my academic performance.

提案: 回答中有较多语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰，建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and prefer the freedom to act spontaneously without being tied to a schedule.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的表达方式。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I have many tasks and need to update my list quickly. It's also more convenient during meetings or online discussions than using paper.

× So by separating the two options I won't spend too much money on the on the less important thing.

✓ So by separating the two options I won't spend too much money on the less important things.

这里的thing应该用复数形式things，因为前文提到了两个选项，表示不重要的事情不止一件。

× As a student I I have lots of things to do in the daily life.

✓ As a student I have lots of things to do in daily life.

daily life前不需要加定冠词the，因为这里指的是一般的日常生活，使用复数或无冠词形式更自然。

× I think the biggest part of this is because some people don't like to be restrict, restrict of it.

✓ I think the biggest part of this is because some people don't like to be restricted by it.

动词restrict需要用过去分词restricted来表示被动，且后面应接介词by表示被限制的对象。

× They don't want to be be trapped, be trapped to the schedule or something.

✓ They don't want to be trapped by the schedule or something.

动词trap的被动形式后应接介词by表示被...限制，而不是to。

× I prefer making a list on my phone because like there are lots of things to do, like numerous things, so I need to address spontaneously.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because there are lots of things to do, numerous things, so I need to address them spontaneously.

address后应接宾语，这里缺少宾语them；like用法重复且多余，应去掉。

× I can't take out my paper all the time, especially on the meeting or on the important online discussion.

✓ I can't take out my paper all the time, especially in meetings or important online discussions.

介词on用于具体日期或某一天，表示在会议或讨论中应使用in，且meeting和discussion应使用复数形式。

× Yes, make on the phone made me.

✓ Yes, making a list on the phone helps me.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，改为making a list作为主语，helps me作为谓语，表达更清晰。