List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和不必要的内容，保持回答自然流畅。

例: Yes, I often make a shopping list with my kids. We usually agree to buy only one or two toys each time to keep things reasonable.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复词汇，并且使句子更连贯。

例: Certainly, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me plan my schedule and remember to talk to my students on time.

提案: 回答较为自然，但有口语填充词，建议减少“uh”等语气词，使用更正式的表达，并且可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I think some people have a good memory and prefer to organize things mentally without writing them down or typing on their phones, so they don't feel the need to make lists.

提案: 回答过于简短且有重复，建议扩展回答内容，说明原因，并使用完整句子。

例: I prefer to use a notebook to write my lists because I find it easier to organize my thoughts on paper than on my phone.

× Yes, I often make a list and usually I make list with my kids and we California we will make a deal 1st and we could we can only buy one or two toys and things like that.

✓ Yes, I often make a list and usually I make lists with my kids and we in California will make a deal first and we can only buy one or two toys and things like that.

这里的“make list”缺少复数形式，应该是“make lists”，因为通常是多次制作清单。

× Yes, I often make a list and usually I make list with my kids and we California we will make a deal 1st and we could we can only buy one or two toys and things like that.

✓ Yes, I often make a list and usually I make lists with my kids and we in California will make a deal first and we can only buy one or two toys and things like that.

“we California”缺少介词“in”，正确表达地点需要用介词“in California”。

× Yes, I often make a list and usually I make list with my kids and we California we will make a deal 1st and we could we can only buy one or two toys and things like that.

✓ Yes, I often make a list and usually I make lists with my kids and we in California will make a deal first and we can only buy one or two toys and things like that.

“we could we can”表达重复且混乱，应使用“we can”表示能力或许可。

× Certainly, I also make a list for my work. In my daily work, I have to plan for my schedule and to talk to some students. So I make a list about this this stuff ahead of 1.

✓ Certainly, I also make a list for my work. In my daily work, I have to plan my schedule and talk to some students. So I make a list about these things ahead of time.

“ahead of 1”表达不完整，应为“ahead of time”，表示提前。

× I guess maybe they just have a very good memory and they make things, uh, organized in their brain and without writing it down or uh, type it in the phone. Some people just don't forget things.

✓ I guess maybe they just have a very good memory and they keep things organized in their brain without writing them down or typing them into the phone. Some people just don't forget things.

“make things organized”表达不自然，改为“keep things organized”；“type it in the phone”中“it”应指代复数“things”，改为“typing them into the phone”。

× I make I use a notebook to record my list.

✓ I use a notebook to record my list.

句子中“I make I use”重复且多余，应删除“make”使句子通顺。