List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn.

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I often go with my friends and we just buy what we need at the moment.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cấu trúc câu và từ vựng chưa chính xác, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I make a list of ingredients when I want to sell cookies, and I buy everything on the list to make sure I have all I need.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu cấu trúc hợp lý. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to buy things spontaneously.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng cách diễn đạt không tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. I can easily access it anywhere and I don't have to worry about losing it.

× No, I don't usually make a list when I go shop, but because I will probably when I go shopping and I usually and I usually be all with my friend so so I don't have a list.

✓ No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping, but I probably will when I go shopping and I usually go with my friend, so I don't have a list.

The verb 'go' should be followed by the '-ing' form 'shopping' to indicate the activity. Also, 'be all with my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'go with my friend' to express accompanying someone. The sentence was also repetitive and needed restructuring for clarity.

× Yes, when I want to sell cookie I will make a list of how ingredients for my cookie and I will buy all in the list where I make.

✓ Yes, when I want to sell cookies, I will make a list of the ingredients for my cookies and I will buy everything on the list I made.

The phrase 'how ingredients' is incorrect; it should be 'the ingredients'. Also, 'sell cookie' should be plural 'sell cookies'. The phrase 'buy all in the list where I make' is unclear and corrected to 'buy everything on the list I made'. The verb forms and prepositions were corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× In my opinion, people don't have this when you when they because they usually cost around doesn't make it easy go there to buy anything which they have are accidental to buy.

✓ In my opinion, people don't like making lists because it usually costs time and doesn't make it easy to go there and buy everything they need without forgetting anything.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needed restructuring to convey the intended meaning. 'Cost around' was replaced with 'costs time', and the sentence was rephrased to express why people avoid making lists. Proper sentence structure and clarity were improved.

× I will refer to make a list in my phone because it was more brilliant for me. I can easy to take is everyone everywhere and I don't and I will don't worry to.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient for me. I can easily take it everywhere and I don't have to worry about it.

The phrase 'refer to make a list in my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to make a list on my phone'. 'Brilliant' is not appropriate here; 'convenient' fits better. 'I can easy to take is everyone everywhere' is corrected to 'I can easily take it everywhere'. The sentence was restructured for grammatical correctness and clarity.