List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但句子结构不够自然，有语法错误，如“would avoid me by some extra things”应为“helps me avoid buying extra things”。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. I just go to the market, get what I need, and leave quickly.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“makes me to do things in order”应为“helps me do things in order”，且“pretend to procrastinate”表达不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁句子。

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work. It helps me organize tasks and avoid procrastination.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“things are not always happens”应为“things do not always happen as planned”。建议补充完整句子，表达更清晰。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their flexibility. Unexpected events can change their plans, so they prefer to stay spontaneous.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误，如“if you finished one items”应为“if you finish an item”，且“target it”用词不当。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁表达。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. When I complete a task, I can easily check it off, which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

× Yes I will create a shopping list.

✓ Yes, I create a shopping list.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是将来时的情态动词“will”。

× It helps a lot and would avoid me by some extra things

✓ It helps a lot and would help me avoid some extra things

“would avoid me by some extra things”结构不正确，应该用“help me avoid”来表达“帮助我避免”。

× would avoid me by some extra things

✓ would help me avoid some extra things

“avoid”后面不需要介词“by”，直接跟宾语。

× and what I need to do is just get into the market and get the things I want and leave.

✓ and what I need to do is just get into the market, get the things I want, and leave.

句子中缺少逗号分隔并列动作，导致结构不清晰。

× Yes, definitely. I always make a list for work before the, you know, work begins

✓ Yes, definitely. I always make a list for work before, you know, work begins

“the”在这里多余，工作前不需要定冠词。

× that a good strategy that makes me to do things in order.

✓ that's a good strategy that helps me do things in order.

“makes me to do”结构错误，正确用法是“help me do”或“makes me do”，且缺少“that is”的缩写“that's”。

× I'm always pretend to procrastinate

✓ I always pretend to procrastinate

“pretend”后不加“to”，且“always”位置应在主语后。

× and A to do list can just help me to.

✓ and a to-do list can just help me.

句子不完整，“to”后缺少动词，且“to do list”应为“to-do list”。

× Well, those people might think that making a list may restrict them their plans.

✓ Well, those people might think that making a list may restrict their plans.

“restrict”后直接跟宾语，“them their plans”重复且错误。

× things are not always happens on our minds

✓ things do not always happen in our minds

“happens”应用复数形式“happen”，且“on our minds”应为“in our minds”。

× and there are always some emergency or you know some accident, right so people.

✓ and there are always some emergencies or, you know, some accidents, right? So people...

“emergency”和“accident”应为复数形式，且句子缺少标点和完整结构。

× if you finished one items or task you can just target it right away

✓ if you finish one item or task, you can just tick it right away

“items”应为单数“item”，且“finished”时态不对，应为一般现在时“finish”。

× you can just target it right away

✓ you can just tick it right away

“target”用法不当，正确表达完成任务应使用“tick”或“check”。