List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 불필요한 단어를 줄이며, 문법적 정확성을 높여야 합니다.

例: No, I usually shop randomly without making a list, and I often buy things online.

提案: 답변에 불필요한 말버릇이 많고 문장이 어색합니다. 명확한 주제문을 사용하고, 문법적으로 올바른 문장으로 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I usually make a study plan because I am a student, and it helps me stay organized.

提案: 문법 오류가 많고 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 이유를 명확하게 설명하고, 문법적으로 올바른 문장을 사용하도록 연습하세요.

例: I think some people avoid making lists because they are afraid of making mistakes or not doing it well.

提案: 발음 오류와 문법적 오류가 많으며, 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 명확한 이유를 들어 간결하고 정확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is quick, convenient, and easy to check.

× Not really, because my shopping is very. Randomly so and I usually buy the. Subject on online.

✓ Not really, because my shopping is very random and I usually buy the items online.

The word 'randomly' is an adverb but should be an adjective 'random' to describe 'shopping'. Also, 'the. Subject' is incorrect; it should be 'the items'. The period is misplaced and 'on online' should be 'online'.

× Not really, because my shopping is very. Randomly so and I usually buy the. Subject on online.

✓ Not really, because my shopping is very random and I usually buy items online.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'Subject' and 'online'. It should be omitted or replaced with appropriate nouns without 'the'.

× Yes, uh, I am uh, because umm, I usually plan planning the list of my study because I am a student. So this is it kind of quite work.

✓ Yes, uh, I do, because umm, I usually plan the list for my study because I am a student. So this kind of works quite well.

The phrase 'plan planning' is incorrect; 'plan' is the correct verb form here. Also, 'this is it kind of quite work' is ungrammatical; it should be 'this kind of works quite well'.

× I think many people doesn't want to created a mistake, the least have to be good.

✓ I think many people don't want to create mistakes; the list has to be good.

'People' is plural, so 'doesn't' should be 'don't'. 'Created' is past tense but should be base form 'create' after 'want to'. 'Mistake' should be plural 'mistakes'. 'Least' is a typo for 'list'. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular 'list'.

× I prefer to make a list on my pond because very very quickly and very usable and check his convenience. So I recommend make a list on **** on your phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very quick, very useful, and convenient to check. So I recommend making a list on your phone.

'Pond' is a typo for 'phone'. 'On my pond' is correct preposition usage. 'Very very quickly' should be 'very quick' (adjective). 'Usable' is better replaced with 'useful'. 'Check his convenience' is incorrect; it should be 'convenient to check'. 'Recommend make' should be 'recommend making'.