List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，使表达更流畅。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop. Instead, I like to look around and find products that catch my eye. Also, if there are discounts, I might buy more items than I planned.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达重复。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively. Usually, it works well and keeps me on track throughout the day.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构松散。建议用更准确的表达，分清主次，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their flexibility. Others might find it unnecessary since they can remember tasks without writing them down. Also, some may think making lists wastes time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的句子结构，明确表达原因，并用连接词连接观点。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more flexible. If unexpected things happen, I can easily rearrange my schedule. Also, I can share my plans with friends conveniently.

× No, actually I like to search for what product that can catch my eyes and do some flexible arrangement and see if there's some discount on the product that will drive me buying another list of the product to buy in my brain.

✓ No, actually I like to search for products that can catch my eyes and do some flexible arrangement and see if there are some discounts on the products that will drive me to buy another list of products in my brain.

这里“what product that”用法不正确，应该用复数形式“products that”，因为指的是不特定的多个商品。同时“there's some discount”应改为“there are some discounts”，因为discount是可数名词，且复数形式更合适。最后“drive me buying”应改为“drive me to buy”，动词搭配错误。

× Will definitely because make a list for my work will help me to better arrange my time and the schedule will help me to know what I can do within a days and make all the things organisable and it usually works.

✓ Definitely will, because making a list for my work will help me to better arrange my time, and the schedule will help me to know what I can do within a day and make all the things organized, and it usually works.

句子开头缺少主语，应该加上“Definitely will”。“make a list”应改为动名词“making a list”作为主语使用。“within a days”中“days”应为单数“day”。“organisable”拼写错误，应为“organized”。

× There are several reason I think maybe some people think make this means not flexible and others just didn't have that habit.

✓ There are several reasons. I think maybe some people think making this means not flexible, and others just don't have that habit.

“reason”应为复数“reasons”，因为前面用了“several”。“make this”应改为动名词“making this”作为主语。时态应保持一致，“didn't have”改为“don't have”。

× Maybe some people think make list is a waste of time.

✓ Maybe some people think making a list is a waste of time.

“make list”应改为动名词短语“making a list”，且“list”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× They can remember all the things that they don't need to make a list actually.

✓ They can remember all the things, so they don't actually need to make a list.

句子结构不清晰，需调整顺序使表达更自然。

× I will choose phones because it will be more flexible and I can rearrange my time frame if some unexpected things that happened and also make a list on the filming that I can share my plan with my friend more easily and conveniently.

✓ I will choose my phone because it is more flexible, and I can rearrange my time frame if some unexpected things happen. Also, making a list on my phone allows me to share my plan with my friends more easily and conveniently.

“phones”应为单数“my phone”，指代个人手机。时态应统一，“things that happened”改为“things happen”。“make a list on the filming”表达不清，应改为“making a list on my phone”。“friend”应为复数“friends”。