List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need, especially when buying many items like food and fruits.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for work, which helps me keep track of my tasks and complete them on time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用更简洁的句子，避免重复，并提供更具体的理由。

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to plan things mentally.

提案: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; for instance, I can easily check my tasks anytime, like when I'm on the subway, without carrying paper.

× Yes, because making a list can help me to remember what thing I should buy.

✓ Yes, because making a list can help me to remember what things I should buy.

这里的thing应该用复数形式things，因为指的是多个物品。单复数错误是常见的语法问题，需要根据上下文判断数量。

× Sometimes if you go to shopping and there have many things you need to buy such as food or fruits, you might forget some of them.

✓ Sometimes if you go shopping and there are many things you need to buy such as food or fruits, you might forget some of them.

这里的there have用法错误，正确用法是there are，表示存在多个物品。动词与主语不一致导致语法错误。

× Yes, when I'm working I'll make A to do list and on it I'll put all my tasks and this can remind me to do this to do this tasks on time.

✓ Yes, when I'm working I'll make a to-do list and on it I'll put all my tasks and this can remind me to do these tasks on time.

这里的A应为小写a，且to do list应连字符to-do list；tasks前应使用these而非this，因为tasks是复数。冠词和指示代词使用错误。

× Yes, when I'm working I'll make A to do list and on it I'll put all my tasks and this can remind me to do this to do this tasks on time.

✓ Yes, when I'm working I'll make a to-do list and on it I'll put all my tasks and this can remind me to do these tasks on time.

tasks是复数，前面的指示代词应使用these而非this，保持数的一致。

× I think some people think making this is just is wasting their time.

✓ I think some people think making this is just wasting their time.

句中多余的is导致语法错误，应去掉一个is，使句子通顺。

× They they prefer making plans in their brain.

✓ They prefer making plans in their brain.

句首重复了they，应删除多余的词。

× I prefer to make a list on my cell phone because it's more convenient and I can check them all the time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my cell phone because it's more convenient and I can check it all the time.

list是单数，代词应使用it而非them，保持代词与先行词数的一致。