List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议你在回答时注意句子结构，避免重复，并且用连词使句子更连贯。例如，可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持你的观点。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to avoid forgetting important items. It also helps me stick to my budget and prevents impulse buying because I categorize the items beforehand.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，建议你简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。同时，注意代词的正确使用。

例: Yes, I always make a detailed list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. Moreover, I use an app that reminds me of my tasks, which improves my efficiency.

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误且表达不够清晰，建议你用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达原因，并且避免重复。可以用连接词来增强逻辑性。

例: Some people dislike making lists because long lists can cause stress. They worry about completing all tasks, and feel disappointed if they cannot finish everything.

提案: 回答中有表达不清和重复，建议你用简洁的句子表达偏好，并说明原因，使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to check them anytime. Also, the apps can send me reminders, which helps me remember my tasks.

× Well, I often make a list when shop to ensure I don't forget I see important.

✓ Well, I often make a list when I shop to ensure I don't forget what I see as important.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'shop', causing a sentence structure error. Also, 'I see important' is incomplete; it should be 'what I see as important' to clarify the meaning.

× It helps me to It helps me to stay busy in my budget and avoid the impulse buying and ioffer making it and ioffer categories.

✓ It helps me to stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying by making it and offering categories.

The sentence is repetitive and contains unclear phrases like 'ioffer making it and ioffer categories'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and fixes sentence structure errors.

× Of course, I'll definitely make her work a big list for my work and it has me to stay organized and focused on my work and focus on my task.

✓ Of course, I'll definitely make a big list for my work and it helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used instead of 'a'. Also, 'has me to stay' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me stay'. The sentence is corrected for proper pronoun use and verb structure.

× I often use the app to keep track of my list which they which reminds me every time.

✓ I often use an app to keep track of my list, which reminds me every time.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'app', which is singular. The sentence is corrected to use 'which' properly referring to 'app'.

× Well, some long list make people feel stress and exercise.

✓ Well, some long lists make people feel stressed and anxious.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'some'. Also, 'stress and exercise' is incorrect; 'stressed and anxious' fits the context better.

× They worried about get everything done and it feels bad if people don't finish the the tasks.

✓ They worry about getting everything done and feel bad if they don't finish the tasks.

'Worried' should be present tense 'worry' to match the context. 'Get' should be in gerund form 'getting' after 'about'. Also, 'it feels bad' is better as 'feel bad' referring to 'they'.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on the paper because it's coming down to check my list, it's coming in. To check my list.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient to check my list.

'On the paper' should be 'on paper' without 'the'. The phrase 'it's coming down to check my list, it's coming in' is unclear and corrected to 'it's more convenient to check my list'.

× I use my phone and the app the iPod used can send the reminders to me.

✓ I use my phone and an app that can send reminders to me.

The sentence is awkward and unclear. 'The app the iPod used' is confusing; corrected to 'an app that can send reminders to me' for clarity and proper sentence structure.