List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use a clear topic sentence and improve sentence structure for naturalness. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone because I have a poor memory and it helps me remember what to buy."

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone because I have a poor memory and it helps me remember what to buy.

提案: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Focus on giving a clear reason and avoid repeating phrases. For example, "No, I don't like making lists for work because I find them confusing and prefer to keep things in my mind."

例: No, I don't like making lists for work because I find them confusing and prefer to keep things in my mind.

提案: Your answer does not directly address why some people dislike making lists. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to be spontaneous."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to be spontaneous.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use clear sentences and linking words. For example, "I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and environmentally friendly than using paper."

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and environmentally friendly than using paper.

× Yes, I make a list when I go to shop because I think that I have not a good memory and I prefer to list make the list online on my phone.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because I think that I do not have a good memory and I prefer to make the list online on my phone.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which is a gerund used after 'go' to indicate the activity. Also, 'I have not a good memory' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not have a good memory' because 'have' requires the auxiliary 'do' in negative present tense. Additionally, 'I prefer to list make the list' is incorrect word order; it should be 'I prefer to make the list'.

× No, I do not prefer to make a list for my work because I confused in list when I go to work, so I can't prefer to make a list for my work.

✓ No, I do not prefer to make a list for my work because I get confused by the list when I go to work, so I don't prefer to make a list for my work.

The phrase 'I confused in list' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I get confused by the list' or 'I am confused by the list' because 'confused' is an adjective and requires a form of 'to be' or 'get' plus the preposition 'by' to indicate the cause of confusion.

× In this modern era, all the people have a busy life schedule, so they make the list for their shopping and other purposes, which is really helpful for them.

✓ In this modern era, all people have busy life schedules, so they make lists for their shopping and other purposes, which are really helpful for them.

'All the people' is better as 'all people' for general statements. 'A busy life schedule' should be plural 'busy life schedules' to agree with 'all people'. 'The list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple people making lists. Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with the plural 'lists'.

× Of course, I like to make a list on my phone because in this modern technology anybody did not use the paper instead of a phone.

✓ Of course, I like to make a list on my phone because in this modern technology nobody uses paper instead of a phone.

'Anybody did not use' is incorrect; the correct negative form is 'nobody uses'. Also, 'use the paper' should be 'use paper' without 'the' because it is uncountable here. 'Instead of a phone' is acceptable but 'instead of using a phone' would be clearer.

× And I also like to prefer the list on phone because it's very easily and convenient.

✓ And I also prefer the list on my phone because it's very easy and convenient.

'Like to prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' alone is sufficient. 'On phone' should be 'on my phone' for clarity. 'Very easily' is an adverb but the sentence needs an adjective 'easy' to describe 'it'. 'Convenient' is correct as an adjective.