List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yeah, absolutely. I have to write down everything I want precisely, or I just forgot about them. I I'm kind of, uh, with bad memory. So yeah, I have to take them down.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yeah, I'm kind of a rational people. So, uh, I will plan my whole day in the morning and just make a list, uh, in order to let me know, uh, in what time, do what thing. So I think it quite, uh, effective, uh, in my work actually.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Because they don't. They just don't want to be restricted by the schedule. So they can do everything, anything in anytime. It's more free, I think.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer, uh, I prefer to make a list on paper because, umm, I don't take my phone with me everywhere in anytime. I'm kind of a old fashioned person.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较自然且直接，但存在语法错误和口语填充词较多，建议减少重复和填充词，注意语法准确性。
例: Yes, I always make a detailed shopping list because I tend to forget things easily due to my poor memory.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答内容较丰富，但语法错误明显，表达不够流畅，建议简化句子结构，减少口语填充词，使用更准确的表达。
例: Yes, I am a rational person, so I plan my entire day in the morning by making a list that helps me know what tasks to do at specific times. It is quite effective for my work.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答较简短且有语法错误，建议扩展内容，使用连词使表达更连贯，避免重复和语法错误。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by schedules and prefer the freedom to do things anytime they want.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答表达清楚但有语法错误和口语填充词，建议减少重复，注意冠词使用，提升表达流畅度。
例: I prefer making lists on paper because I don't always carry my phone with me. I consider myself a bit old-fashioned.
文法
× I have to write down everything I want precisely, or I just forgot about them.
✓ I have to write down everything I want precisely, or I just forget about it.
这里的主语是单数的“everything”，所以后面的代词应该用单数形式“it”，而不是复数“them”。另外，时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时“forget”而不是过去时“forgot”。
× I'm kind of a rational people.
✓ I'm kind of a rational person.
“people”是复数形式，表示“人们”，而这里需要单数形式“person”表示“一个人”。
× in what time, do what thing.
✓ at what time, do what thing.
表示具体时间点时，应该用介词“at”而不是“in”。
× I think it quite, uh, effective, uh, in my work actually.
✓ I think it is quite, uh, effective, uh, in my work actually.
句子缺少系动词“is”，使句子结构完整。
× I don't take my phone with me everywhere in anytime.
✓ I don't take my phone with me everywhere or anytime.
“everywhere”和“anytime”不能同时用“in”连接，应使用“or”连接，且“in anytime”不正确。
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