List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“like make making this when I shopping”应改为“I like making a list when I go shopping”。建议你注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I like making a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I can organize my shopping better and avoid forgetting important items.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且未直接回答问题。建议你先明确回答是否制作工作清单，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免语法错误。

例: Actually, I don't usually make lists for my work because I find it challenging to keep track. Sometimes, I prefer to handle tasks spontaneously.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在重复和语法错误。建议你用更准确的词汇表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer freedom and dislike being restricted by rules. It's a personal choice for many.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不自然的问题。建议你简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，使表达更流畅自然。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because nowadays, most people use their phones all the time. It's convenient and easy to access.

× Yes, I like make making this when I shopping because I think it's a complete way and it's can make me remember something when I am shopping.

✓ Yes, I like making this when I shop because I think it's a complete way and it can help me remember something when I am shopping.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用动词的 -ing 形式。这里 'like' 后面应该接 'making' 而不是 'make'。另外，'when I shopping' 缺少助动词，应改为 'when I shop'。此外，'it's can' 是错误的，应改为 'it can'。

× Yes, I like make making this when I shopping because I think it's a complete way and it's can make me remember something when I am shopping.

✓ Yes, I like making this when I shop because I think it's a complete way and it can help me remember something when I am shopping.

描述习惯动作时应使用一般现在时，'when I shopping' 应改为 'when I shop'。

× This way I can organization my shopping better and afford to forget something important items.

✓ This way I can organize my shopping better and avoid forgetting some important items.

'organization' 是名词，句中应使用动词 'organize'。'something important items' 中 'something' 是单数，'items' 是复数，搭配不当，应改为 'some important items'。

× Actually I knows a ways to make lists when I work because I think this travel for me because I'm lazy and I am casually by something and when I work I think I have many challenge and change so I not make a.

✓ Actually, I know ways to make lists when I work because I think this works for me because I'm lazy and I am careless sometimes, and when I work I think I have many challenges and changes so I don't make one.

'I knows' 中 'knows' 应为 'know'，因为主语是第一人称单数。

× Actually I knows a ways to make lists when I work because I think this travel for me because I'm lazy and I am casually by something and when I work I think I have many challenge and change so I not make a.

✓ Actually, I know ways to make lists when I work because I think this works for me because I'm lazy and I am careless sometimes, and when I work I think I have many challenges and changes so I don't make one.

'a ways' 应为复数 'ways'，'many challenge and change' 应为复数 'many challenges and changes'。

× Actually I knows a ways to make lists when I work because I think this travel for me because I'm lazy and I am casually by something and when I work I think I have many challenge and change so I not make a.

✓ Actually, I know ways to make lists when I work because I think this works for me because I'm lazy and I am careless sometimes, and when I work I think I have many challenges and changes so I don't make one.

'I not make a' 缺少助动词，应为 'I don't make one'。

× I think making this is a way of life. So most some of people like it and some of people don't like it.

✓ I think making lists is a way of life. So some people like it and some people don't like it.

'most some of people' 结构不正确，应为 'some people'。

× I think making this is a way of life. So most some of people like it and some of people don't like it.

✓ I think making lists is a way of life. So some people like it and some people don't like it.

'some of people' 应为 'some people'，不需要 'of'。

× And I think the reason is some some people like freedom and they don't like the religion list by the rule, so they don't like.

✓ And I think the reason is some people like freedom and they don't like the rigid list by the rules, so they don't like it.

'religion list by the rule' 语义不清，应为 'rigid list by the rules'。句尾缺少宾语，应加 'it'。

× I think for the most modern people, we all think that make list on the phone because in our day people always use their phone in every time and I think make list of phone is a comforting way.

✓ I think for most modern people, we all think that making lists on the phone is convenient because nowadays people always use their phones all the time and I think making lists on the phone is a comfortable way.

'for the most modern people' 应为 'for most modern people'。'make list on the phone' 应为 'making lists on the phone'。'in every time' 应为 'all the time'。'make list of phone' 应为 'making lists on the phone'。

× I think for the most modern people, we all think that make list on the phone because in our day people always use their phone in every time and I think make list of phone is a comforting way.

✓ I think for most modern people, we all think that making lists on the phone is convenient because nowadays people always use their phones all the time and I think making lists on the phone is a comfortable way.

动词后接动名词形式，'make' 应改为 'making'。