List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized. However, sometimes I buy items that are not on the list if I find something interesting.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work. It helps me organize my tasks and stay focused throughout the day.

提案: 回答不够具体，表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议明确说明原因，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally.

提案: 回答表达了基本观点，但语法和用词不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并补充理由使回答更完整。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember better and the list is easier to see.

× Yes, I always make a list because I like to do the plan, but when I was shopping I always do the least in order to either buy something out of the plan.

✓ Yes, I always make a list because I like to make a plan, but when I am shopping I always do the list in order to avoid buying something out of the plan.

动词短语中，'do the plan' 应改为 'make a plan'，因为计划通常用 'make'。'do the least' 应为 'do the list'，且时态应与上下文一致，购物时用现在进行时 'am shopping'。此外，'either buy' 用法不当，应改为 'avoid buying' 来表达避免买计划外的东西。

× Yes, I do the list always because I have planned something and when I will study in the morning I will make a list to show what I have to do this today.

✓ Yes, I always do the list because I have planned something, and when I study in the morning I make a list to show what I have to do today.

'do the list always' 中副词位置不正确，应为 'always do the list'。'when I will study' 中将来时不正确，时间状语从句中一般用一般现在时，改为 'when I study'。'this today' 多余，改为 'today' 即可。

× I think because making lists is always a difficult action and what I have done and what I will do.

✓ I think making lists is always a difficult task because of what I have done and what I will do.

原句结构混乱，'because' 后应接原因，且句子缺少谓语，改为 'I think making lists is always a difficult task because of...' 使句子完整且逻辑清晰。

× I prefer to make a list on the paper because I like to write it down and this more clearly.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I like to write it down more clearly.

'on the paper' 中 'the' 不必要，通常说 'on paper'。'this more clearly' 结构不完整，应改为 'more clearly'，表示更清楚地写下来。