List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议避免冗余，注意主谓一致，使用更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and makes the process more efficient.

提案: 回答不连贯，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，逻辑连贯，避免语法错误，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I often make lists for my work visits because they help clarify the process. However, sometimes seeing all the tasks makes me feel stressed.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但有重复和语法错误。建议简化表达，避免重复，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time, and seeing many tasks can make them feel stressed.

提案: 回答中有重复和表达不准确的问题。建议注意用词准确，避免重复，句子结构清晰。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and some apps can remind me to complete my tasks.

× Without a list, I'll forget what to buy quickly and with the least help.

✓ Without a list, I'll forget what to buy quickly and with little help.

这里的表达应使用不可数名词“little help”而不是“least help”，因为“least”通常用于比较级，且“help”作为不可数名词时应用“little”表示少量帮助。

× That will make the whole process more efficient and ensures I buy everything I need.

✓ That will make the whole process more efficient and ensure I buy everything I need.

句子中“will make”是将来时，后面应使用动词原形“ensure”与前面的谓语动词保持一致，避免时态和主谓不一致。

× I often make a list for my work visits. Help.

✓ I often make a list for my work visits to help.

“Help”单独成句不完整，应与前句合并形成完整句子，表达“为了帮助”的意思。

× It can make all the process more clear than before.

✓ It can make the whole process clearer than before.

“process”前应使用定冠词“the”，形容词“clear”应使用比较级“clearer”来比较程度。

× But to be honest, it doesn't work at all.

✓ But to be honest, it doesn't work at all.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× That's mean because when I see all the task I will feel stressful.

✓ That means because when I see all the tasks I feel stressed.

“That's mean”应为“That means”，动词需用第三人称单数形式；“task”应为复数“tasks”；“feel stressful”应改为“feel stressed”，因为“stressful”形容事物，“stressed”形容人的感受。

× some people think some people may feel stressful when they see many tasks on the task on the list.

✓ some people think they may feel stressed when they see many tasks on the list.

重复使用“some people”冗余，应简化为“they”；“stressful”应改为“stressed”；“task on the list”重复，应去掉多余部分。

× I prefer to make a list on the form.

✓ I prefer to make a list on the phone.

“form”应为“phone”，根据上下文意指“手机”，这里是拼写错误。

× Besides, with the advanced technology, some apps can monitor can monitor me to finish my task on the list.

✓ Besides, with advanced technology, some apps can monitor me to finish my tasks on the list.

“can monitor”重复，应删除多余部分；“task”应为复数“tasks”；“the advanced technology”中的定冠词“the”可省略，表达更自然。