List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Îmbunătățește claritatea și fluența răspunsului tău. Folosește propoziții mai simple și evită repetițiile. De exemplu, exprimă ideea că faci o listă pe telefon pentru a nu uita ce trebuie să cumperi, într-un mod mai natural și concis.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone because I often forget what I need to buy. This helps me remember everything and saves time.

提案: Fii mai direct și organizează răspunsul. Începe prin a spune că nu lucrezi acum, apoi explică clar că faci liste pentru sarcinile de la facultate, folosind cuvinte de legătură pentru coerență.

例: I am not working at the moment because I am a student. However, I often make lists for my college tasks, projects, and exam preparations to stay organized.

提案: Folosește cuvinte de legătură mai clare și exprimă ideile într-un mod mai natural. De exemplu, explică două motive pentru care unii oameni nu fac liste, folosind 'because' și 'also' pentru coerență.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. Also, having too many tasks on a list can feel overwhelming and cause stress instead of helping.

提案: Clarifică și structurează răspunsul pentru a fi mai natural. Evită exprimările confuze și folosește propoziții scurte și clare pentru a explica preferința ta.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it saves paper and is faster. Also, I always have my phone with me, so I don't lose my lists.

× Yes, I do a list when I go to shop because my memory could not serve me really in some time, some moments.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because my memory does not serve me well sometimes.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' to express the activity. 'Could not serve me really in some time, some moments' is awkward; it should be 'does not serve me well sometimes' to express occasional memory issues clearly.

× Because of this I write down in my notes on phone what I need to buy, not forget this.

✓ Because of this, I write down in my notes on my phone what I need to buy so I don't forget.

The phrase 'write down in my notes on phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my' before 'phone'. Also, 'not forget this' is incorrect; it should be 'so I don't forget' to express purpose.

× I'm at 1st I want to say that I'm not working right now because I'm a student, but usually when I'm at college I make a list for some tasks I need to complete or some project I need to do or when I'm preparing for exam.

✓ First, I want to say that I'm not working right now because I'm a student, but usually when I'm at college, I make a list of some tasks I need to complete or some projects I need to do, or when I'm preparing for an exam.

The phrase 'I'm at 1st' is incorrect; it should be 'First'. Also, 'make a list for some tasks' should be 'make a list of some tasks'. 'Some project' should be plural 'some projects' to match plural tasks. 'Preparing for exam' needs the article 'an' before 'exam'.

× I believe some people dislike making this because they find the process time consuming, but additionally some in individuals might find the list overwhelming if they have too many tasks which can lead to stress rather than organization.

✓ I believe some people dislike making lists because they find the process time-consuming, but additionally, some individuals might find the list overwhelming if they have too many tasks, which can lead to stress rather than organization.

'Making this' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' to refer to the general activity. 'Some in individuals' is incorrect; it should be 'some individuals'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I write the list on paper, for me it's time consuming and I don't want to waste a lot of paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I write the list on paper, it is time-consuming for me and I don't want to waste a lot of paper.

The phrase 'for me it's time consuming' is better expressed as 'it is time-consuming for me' for clarity and correct adverb placement. 'Time-consuming' should be hyphenated.

× And I'm sure that the list is with me if I hear right in my phone and I know that I don't lose.

✓ And I'm sure that the list is with me if I look at my phone, and I know that I won't lose it.

'If I hear right in my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'if I look at my phone'. Also, 'I don't lose' is incomplete; it should be 'I won't lose it' to express future certainty and include the object pronoun 'it' referring to the list.