List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达购物时是否使用购物清单，并避免无关内容。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket. It helps me remember what I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: 回答中出现了明显的词汇错误（'making leather'），句子不完整且含糊。建议使用正确词汇，清晰表达制作清单的效果。

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work. It helps me organize my tasks clearly and improves my productivity.

提案: 表达不够准确，语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的表达方式，说明原因并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and believe they can remember tasks without writing them down.

提案: 回答含糊且语法错误严重，表达不完整。建议明确表达偏好，使用连贯句子并避免无关内容。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry around.

× Well, I go shopping with a list and when I rest at the supermarket and I see everything and if I want to buy, I will buy it and without thinking.

✓ Well, I go shopping with a list, and when I rest at the supermarket, I see everything, and if I want to buy something, I will buy it without thinking.

句子中缺少逗号导致结构混乱，且“buy”后缺少宾语，需补充“something”使句子完整。

× Making leather for my work is very effective and I can see what I can do clearly and it's a great way to avoid to.

✓ Making a list for my work is very effective, and I can see clearly what I can do. It's a great way to avoid mistakes.

原句中“Making leather”应为“Making a list”，且“avoid to”用法错误，正确用法是“avoid + 名词/动名词”。

× Well maybe I guess they think making list is boring and waste of time 'cause they should do and they will remember on their brain.

✓ Well, maybe I guess they think making lists is boring and a waste of time because they should do it and they will remember it in their brain.

“making list”应为“making lists”，“waste of time”前需加冠词“a”，“remember on their brain”应为“remember it in their brain”。

× Well, to be honest, I met least on my phone and this is because it's very convenient and mobile phone is possible and but however. I don't have a hobby to make this papers and.

✓ Well, to be honest, I make lists on my phone because it's very convenient and mobile phones are portable. However, I don't have a habit of making paper lists.

“met least”应为“make lists”，“mobile phone is possible”表达不清，应改为“mobile phones are portable”，“hobby to make this papers”应为“habit of making paper lists”。