List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, say "I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me shop efficiently and save time."

例: I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me shop efficiently and save time.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "I always make a list before work because it helps me stay organized and efficient. As a result, I save time and don't forget important tasks."

例: I always make a list before work because it helps me stay organized and efficient. As a result, I save time and don't forget important tasks.

提案: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and simply. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and don't want to plan everything in advance."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and don't want to plan everything in advance.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to be more natural and clear. For example, "It depends on the task, but I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because paper can be lost, while phone data is safely stored."

例: It depends on the task, but I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because paper can be lost, while phone data is safely stored.

× Yes, I do make a list when I'm going to shopping because I want it to serve in a efficient in a in a systematic way so that my time can be also managed.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I'm going shopping because I want it to serve in an efficient and systematic way so that my time can also be managed.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' is followed by the gerund form without 'to' when indicating an activity, so it should be 'going shopping'. Also, 'a efficient' is incorrect because 'efficient' starts with a vowel sound, so the article should be 'an'. The phrase 'in a in a systematic way' is repetitive and should be corrected to 'and systematic way'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Yes, I do make a list when I'm going to shopping because I want it to serve in a efficient in a in a systematic way so that my time can be also managed.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I'm going shopping because I want it to serve in an efficient and systematic way so that my time can also be managed.

The preposition 'in' before 'a efficient' and 'a systematic way' is unnecessary and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'in an efficient and systematic way' without extra prepositions. Removing redundant prepositions makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do make a list when I'm going to shopping because I want it to serve in a efficient in a in a systematic way so that my time can be also managed.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I'm going shopping because I want it to serve in an efficient and systematic way so that my time can also be managed.

The phrase 'a efficient' is incorrect because 'efficient' begins with a vowel sound and requires the article 'an'. Also, the repetition 'in a in a' is incorrect and should be removed. Correct use of articles and quantifiers is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× I always make a list before doing any work because it helps me to do my work efficiently and and in organized way.

✓ I always make a list before doing any work because it helps me to do my work efficiently and in an organized way.

The phrase 'in organized way' is missing the article 'an' before 'organized'. The correct phrase is 'in an organized way'. Also, the repeated 'and and' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'and'. Proper use of articles and avoiding repetition improves sentence clarity.

× This way I can save my time and avoid forgetting an important topics.

✓ This way I can save my time and avoid forgetting important topics.

The phrase 'an important topics' is incorrect because 'an' is used with singular nouns, but 'topics' is plural. The article 'an' should be removed to correctly modify the plural noun 'topics'. This correction ensures subject-article agreement.

× So in the preference of others, the reason behind they do not like making list is that they don't want to book anything before else or they want to do direct their work.

✓ So, according to others' preferences, the reason they do not like making lists is that they don't want to book anything beforehand or they want to do their work directly.

The phrase 'the reason behind they do not like' is incorrect; it should be 'the reason they do not like'. Also, 'making list' should be plural 'making lists'. The phrase 'before else' is incorrect and should be 'beforehand'. 'Do direct their work' is incorrect; it should be 'do their work directly'. These corrections fix pronoun usage, pluralization, and adverb placement.

× So in the preference of others, the reason behind they do not like making list is that they don't want to book anything before else or they want to do direct their work.

✓ So, according to others' preferences, the reason they do not like making lists is that they don't want to book anything beforehand or they want to do their work directly.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists. Also, 'preference' should be plural 'preferences' to match 'others'. Correct plural forms improve grammatical accuracy.

× So in the preference of others, the reason behind they do not like making list is that they don't want to book anything before else or they want to do direct their work.

✓ So, according to others' preferences, the reason they do not like making lists is that they don't want to book anything beforehand or they want to do their work directly.

The phrase 'in the preference of others' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'according to others' preferences'. Also, 'before else' is not a correct phrase; 'beforehand' is appropriate. Correct preposition use is essential for clarity.

× OK, that depends on my work, but mostly I prefer To Do List on my phone because paper paper might be lost and the phone and the data on the phone might be stored.

✓ OK, that depends on my work, but mostly I prefer to-do lists on my phone because paper might be lost, and the phone and the data on the phone can be stored safely.

The phrase 'prefer To Do List on my phone' is awkward; it should be 'prefer to-do lists on my phone'. Also, 'paper paper' is a repetition error and should be 'paper'. The phrase 'the phone and the data on the phone might be stored' is unclear; adding 'safely' clarifies the meaning. Correct preposition and article use improve sentence clarity.