List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言较为自然，但存在语法和表达上的小错误，如“sticking onto the list”应为“sticking to the list”，“provides important purchase”表达不清晰。建议注意固定搭配和表达的准确性，同时避免重复和冗余。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me control my spending and avoid buying things I don't need. For instance, by sticking to the list, I can shop more quickly and save both time and money. This approach is very helpful for budgeting effectively.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“and I often and I have noticed”，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my studies because it helps me manage my time better. For example, I use an app to track my tasks, and since I started doing this, my productivity has improved. This method helps me focus and finish my work more efficiently.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但“not very effectively”应为“not very effective”，表达需更准确。建议注意形容词和副词的正确使用，同时可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time and not very effective. For example, they may spend too much time planning but often fail to follow through. Therefore, they prefer to keep their lives simple without strict schedules, which helps them feel less stressed.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法错误和表达不清晰，如“the physical act act of writing”，“If I make this unfold”，“I end up I end up playing spending much time”。建议加强语法基础，注意句子结构和时态的正确使用，避免重复和不完整的句子。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing by hand helps me organize my time better. If I use my phone, I often get distracted by other apps. For example, last week when I was making a to-do list on my phone, I ended up spending too much time playing games instead.

× For example, by sticking onto the list, I can shop more efficiently and save both time and money.

✓ For example, by sticking to the list, I can shop more efficiently and save both time and money.

介词“onto”表示动作向某物表面移动，而这里应使用“to”表示遵守或坚持某事。应使用“sticking to the list”表示遵守购物清单。

× This method also provides important purchase which is very useful for budgeting.

✓ This method also provides important information which is very useful for budgeting.

“purchase”是名词，意为“购买”，此处语境应为“信息”，故应改为“important information”。

× I use an app to keep track of my tasks and I often and I have noticed that my productivity has improved since I started doing this.

✓ I use an app to keep track of my tasks and I have noticed that my productivity has improved since I started doing this.

句子中多余的“and I often”导致结构混乱，应删除以保持句子通顺。

× Actually, some people don't like making lists because they say it is a waste of time and not very effectively.

✓ Actually, some people don't like making lists because they say it is a waste of time and not very effective.

“effectively”是副词，修饰动词；此处应使用形容词“effective”来修饰“it”。

× If I make this unfold, I will also always distract by other apps.

✓ If I make this on my phone, I will also always be distracted by other apps.

“make this unfold”表达不正确，应改为“make this on my phone”；“distract”是主动动词，需用被动形式“be distracted”表示被分心。

× For example, last week when I doing A to do list, I end up I end up playing spending much time.

✓ For example, last week when I was doing a to-do list, I ended up spending much time playing.

“when I doing”缺少助动词，应为“when I was doing”；“I end up I end up”重复，应删去；“playing spending much time”语序错误，应为“ended up spending much time playing”。