List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use correct verb tenses and smoother expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more effectively.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy. I often prepare a list for the whole week to ensure I don't forget anything important. This makes shopping more efficient and less stressful.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases that make it hard to understand. Focus on using correct verb tenses and clearer vocabulary. Also, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

例: Yes, I make a list of tasks every day at work. Usually, in the morning, I write down what I need to do so I can follow the list and complete all tasks by the end of the day. This helps me stay organized and not miss anything important.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some awkward phrasing and minor errors. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. They feel confident they can remember important things without writing them down. Additionally, some find lists unnecessary and believe it's easier to keep everything in their mind.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has several hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and clarify your points with linking words.

例: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easy to carry when I go out. Also, it's less likely to lose the list compared to paper. Therefore, I find using my phone more convenient.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it's helped me remember actually what items I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember actually what items I need to buy.

The phrase 'it's helped' incorrectly uses the past participle 'helped' with 'it is'. The correct form is 'it helps' to indicate a habitual action in the present tense.

× I often prepare a list of the entire week, which ensure that I don't forget anything important.

✓ I often prepare a list for the entire week, which ensures that I don't forget anything important.

The verb 'ensure' must agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to 'a list'. Therefore, 'ensure' should be 'ensures'. Also, 'of the entire week' is better expressed as 'for the entire week' to indicate purpose.

× Yes, on a daily basis I made the least at the my work workplace.

✓ Yes, on a daily basis I make the list at my workplace.

The past tense 'made' is incorrect here because the context implies a habitual action, so the present tense 'make' is appropriate. Also, 'least' is a typo for 'list', and 'the my work workplace' is redundant and incorrect; 'my workplace' suffices.

× Yes, on a daily basis I made the least at the my work workplace.

✓ Yes, on a daily basis I make the list at my workplace.

The phrase 'the my work workplace' incorrectly uses both 'the' and 'my' together and repeats 'work' unnecessarily. The correct phrase is 'my workplace' without 'the'.

× So usually in the morning I create the list of tasks which I need to perform in the dead end.

✓ So usually in the morning I create a list of tasks which I need to perform by the end of the day.

'The list' should be 'a list' as it is introduced for the first time. 'In the dead end' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by the end of the day' to indicate a deadline.

× In this way it helps me to follow the each task and complete at the end of the day so I don't I don't miss any talks.

✓ In this way it helps me to follow each task and complete them by the end of the day so I don't miss any tasks.

'The each task' is incorrect; 'each task' does not require 'the'. Also, 'complete at the end of the day' should be 'complete them by the end of the day' to clarify the object and time. 'Talks' is a typo for 'tasks'.

× In my opinion, some people don't like making this because they prefer to rely on their memory.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory.

'Making this' is vague and incorrect; the correct phrase is 'making lists' to refer to the activity discussed.

× Some find it some fine list unnecessary and believe it's easier to keep things in their mind.

✓ Some find making lists unnecessary and believe it's easier to keep things in their mind.

The phrase 'some find it some fine list unnecessary' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'Some find making lists unnecessary' to clearly express the idea.

× I usually prefer to make the list on my phone because it easy to, uh, carry whenever, uh, we go outside as well as, uh, it's not possible to lose that at least of a item which we have made.

✓ I usually prefer to make the list on my phone because it is easy to carry whenever we go outside, and it's not possible to lose the list of items which I have made.

Missing 'is' after 'it' is a present tense issue. 'At least of a item' is incorrect; it should be 'the list of items'. Also, 'we' should be 'I' to maintain consistency with the speaker's perspective.