List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь отвечать более структурировано, используя простые предложения и объясняя причину вашего поведения. Избегайте повторений и старайтесь быть более конкретным.

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I often buy only a few items. I find it unnecessary to prepare a list for small shopping trips.

提案: Ваш ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и нечетко выражает мысли. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова для логичности и четко объяснять, как списки помогают вам в работе.

例: Yes, I make lists when I prepare for exams. They help me organize my study topics because sometimes I feel confused about what to study first. So, making a list works well for me.

提案: Ответ не ясен и содержит много ошибок. Попробуйте сформулировать мысль проще и логичнее, объясняя причины, почему некоторые люди не любят составлять списки.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. Also, they might feel that lists limit their freedom or are unnecessary.

提案: Ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Используйте связующие слова для плавности и избегайте повторов.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Also, it's easier to save and find lists on my phone than on paper, which I might lose.

× No, I don't. I didn't do this and I go to the shopping because I think I don't need this because often I don't buy many things and I don't know about this.

✓ No, I don't. I didn't do this and I went shopping because I think I don't need it since I often don't buy many things and I don't know about this.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I go to the shopping' should be 'I went shopping' to match the past tense context. Also, 'I don't need this' should be 'I don't need it' for correct pronoun use.

× Yeah, then I prepared exams. I I make a list and they help me because I confusion and I don't know what first I need learning.

✓ Yeah, when I prepared for exams, I made a list and it helped me because I was confused and didn't know what I needed to learn first.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'make' and 'help' when referring to past events. 'I make' should be 'I made' and 'they help' should be 'it helped'. Also, 'I confusion' is incorrect; it should be 'I was confused'.

× So I do a work list and it's working.

✓ So I made a work list and it worked.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses improperly. Since the context is past, 'do' should be 'made' and 'it's working' should be 'it worked'.

× I think they are like have a control and as they do this for don't buy something, don't need it and they it's help some people to be to be.

✓ I think they like to have control and they do this to avoid buying things they don't need, and it helps some people to be organized.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun and verb forms such as 'they are like have' and 'they it's help'. These should be corrected to 'they like to have' and 'it helps'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because a phone always on my hand and I can just save this and and paper not always in my hand and I can losing it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always in my hand and I can just save it, whereas paper is not always in my hand and I can lose it.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions such as 'on my hand' which should be 'in my hand'. Also, 'I can losing it' is incorrect; it should be 'I can lose it'. The sentence also needs 'to' after 'prefer'.