List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apnar uttor ta aro natural korte, apni direct question er uttor deben, tarpor kichu specific karon bolben. Apni beshi redundant hoben na, ar sentence gulo 3-4 line er moddhe rakhben.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I bought all the items on my list and didn't forget anything. This way, I save time and avoid unnecessary purchases.

提案: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu kichu grammar ar vocabulary improve kora dorkar. Apni linking words use korte paren jemon 'therefore', 'so' jate uttor ta aro logical hoy. Apni specific example dite paren jate uttor ta aro clear hoy.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by making a list, I can manage my time better and avoid forgetting important tasks. Therefore, it definitely improves my productivity.

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure aro clear korte hobe. Apni direct question er uttor deben, tarpor specific karon bolben. Linking words use korben jate uttor ta logical hoy. Apni vocabulary aro boro korte paren.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to keep their thoughts flexible. Everyone has their own choice, so some people feel that lists limit their freedom. I respect their opinion because different methods work for different people.

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni direct question er uttor deben, tarpor specific karon bolben. Linking words use korben jate uttor ta natural hoy. Apni vocabulary aro boro korte paren.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is a flexible and handy device that I carry everywhere. For example, when I go out, I always have my phone with me, so it's convenient to check my list anytime.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because I don't remember always everything.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because I don't always remember everything.

The adverb 'always' is incorrectly placed after the verb 'remember'. In English, adverbs of frequency like 'always' usually come before the main verb but after the auxiliary verb. So, 'don't always remember' is correct.

× That's why I'm making a list is very good for me.

✓ That's why making a list is very good for me.

The original sentence has an incorrect structure by combining 'I'm making a list' and 'is very good for me' without proper connection. The gerund phrase 'making a list' should be the subject of the sentence.

× That helped me for sure.

✓ That helps me for sure.

The context is about a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate instead of past tense 'helped'.

× For example, by the listing I can manage my time, I can save my time and I avoid forwarding important duties or things.

✓ For example, by listing I can manage my time, save time, and avoid forgetting important duties or things.

The phrase 'by the listing' is incorrect; 'by listing' is correct. Also, 'forwarding' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'forgetting'. The sentence is also improved by removing redundant 'I can' and making it more concise.

× Overall, making is definitely improve my product.

✓ Overall, making lists definitely improves my productivity.

The verb 'improve' should be in third person singular form 'improves' to agree with the subject. Also, 'making' alone is vague; 'making lists' is clearer. 'Product' is incorrect; 'productivity' fits the context better.

× Some people dislike making list because their thoughts are more flexible.

✓ Some people dislike making lists because their thoughts are more flexible.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists.

× It depends on us because we can make a list or we don't make a list, it only our choice.

✓ It depends on us because we can make a list or not; it is only our choice.

The phrase 'it only our choice' is missing the verb 'is'. Also, the sentence is better structured by separating the ideas with a semicolon or conjunction.

× Everyone have their freedoms, so somebody dislike to making a list.

✓ Everyone has their freedom, so some people dislike making lists.

'Everyone' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. 'Freedoms' should be singular 'freedom' in this context. 'Somebody' is singular but the verb 'dislike' is plural; better to use 'some people' to match plural verb. Also, 'dislike to making' is incorrect; correct form is 'dislike making'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because phone is very flexible and handy device which is we carry on every spot.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is a very flexible and handy device that we carry everywhere.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'phone' and 'a' before 'very flexible'. 'Which is we carry on every spot' is incorrect; correct phrasing is 'that we carry everywhere'.

× When we go outing we carry our phone that's why I prefer that make a list in our phone.

✓ When we go out, we carry our phone; that's why I prefer to make a list on my phone.

'Go outing' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'go out'. Also, 'prefer that make a list' should be 'prefer to make a list'. Preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone.